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A sheriff is visited by Federal agents who are hunting an alien that has crashed in the hills ? an alien that can shape shift into any form. One by one people disappear and he must find and kill the creature to save his town.
Logline is a little too wordy and some of the information is unnecessary You could try something like: "A local sheriff teams up with two federal agents to track down a shape-shifting alien responsible for the disappearance of several members of his community... including his fiancee'!" I kind of adRead more
Logline is a little too wordy and some of the information is unnecessary
You could try something like:
“A local sheriff teams up with two federal agents to track down a shape-shifting alien responsible for the disappearance of several members of his community… including his fiancee’!”
I kind of added the last part to raise the stakes.
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