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?An advanced alien race threatens to enslave Earth in the 1500?s and humanity?s last hope lies in the unproven inventions of an Italian Renaissance artist who holds a dark secret.?
For what it's worth, Da Vinci's name is in the title of the script. Although I went back and forth a few times, the working title for now is "Da Vinci and his Weapons of War".
For what it’s worth, Da Vinci’s name is in the title of the script. Although I went back and forth a few times, the working title for now is “Da Vinci and his Weapons of War”.
See lessA Jamaican virus infects a small town and only a bunch of stoners can save their family and friends from becoming zombies by rounding them up and getting them high.
The logline kind of reads more like a comedy (or comedy-horror). Even though this could work as an ensemble piece, it would be nice to see a main protagonist. The question I have is, so we know that getting high will prevent you from becoming a zombie, but then, what do you do with those who alreadyRead more
The logline kind of reads more like a comedy (or comedy-horror). Even though this could work as an ensemble piece, it would be nice to see a main protagonist.
The question I have is, so we know that getting high will prevent you from becoming a zombie, but then, what do you do with those who already are zombies? Will the protagonist(s) be fighting them off while being high?
I can imagine them doing that, which is kind of why this reads more like a comedy.
See lessAn undercover policewoman lures a member of the Albanian mafia into a sexual relationship, in order to infiltrate and expose his gang’s cocaine trafficking.
Not a bad logline. The "who" and "goal" are clear. Even though the obstacles are implied, it would be nice to know more about the stakes. Maybe consider something like: "An undercover policewoman lures an Albanian mafia member into a sexual relationship in order to expose him, but ends up trying toRead more
Not a bad logline. The “who” and “goal” are clear. Even though the obstacles are implied, it would be nice to know more about the stakes.
Maybe consider something like:
“An undercover policewoman lures an Albanian mafia member into a sexual relationship in order to expose him, but ends up trying to protect herself and her loved ones when the situation becomes much more complicated than she could have ever imagined.”
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