1. Posted: April 28, 2018In:

    ?Massachusetts, 1692: The leader of a coven must convince a Puritan minister to work with her to find and stop a powerful and cunning excommunicated sorceress whom she suspects is secretly behind the Salem Witch Trials.?

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    Side note: As I was doing some research, I found that not all the Puritans were for the Salem witch trials and there were a few religious and political figures who voiced their displeasure and I found at least one who, though he supported the prosecution of witches, did not like the way it was carriRead more

    Side note: As I was doing some research, I found that not all the Puritans were for the Salem witch trials and there were a few religious and political figures who voiced their displeasure and I found at least one who, though he supported the prosecution of witches, did not like the way it was carried out, so I may base the Puritan minister in my logline on an actual person.

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  2. Posted: April 25, 2018In:

    After a drunken hookup at a work party, an ad-exec realizes that he is in love with his ?work wife.? He must decide whether to profess his feelings or keep their relationship as is before she moves out of state with her boyfriend.

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    I would like to know why it's so important for him to confess his feelings toward his work wife? Is the ad exec married? Is he not happy with his marriage? If he is, what is it about his work wife that it's worth risking his marriage? Assuming he knows she has a boyfriend, why would he want to profeRead more

    I would like to know why it’s so important for him to confess his feelings toward his work wife? Is the ad exec married? Is he not happy with his marriage? If he is, what is it about his work wife that it’s worth risking his marriage?

    Assuming he knows she has a boyfriend, why would he want to profess his feelings toward her?

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  3. Posted: March 16, 2018In:

    A blacklisted 50s American screenwriter sets out to write the perfect script to win back his job, but an alien fungus slowly dissolves his ability to tell fact from fiction.

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    I kind of agree with what the others said. Depending on the reason he was blacklisted, he may not be able to get his job back even if he had the "perfect script" (like the other reviewer already mentioned), assuming that even exists. You protagonist and goal is clear, which is good, but for me, theRead more

    I kind of agree with what the others said. Depending on the reason he was blacklisted, he may not be able to get his job back even if he had the “perfect script” (like the other reviewer already mentioned), assuming that even exists.

    You protagonist and goal is clear, which is good, but for me, the issue lies more in the obstacle.

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