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Offered a drug at a high end party, a woman?s eyes slowly open to another dimension, she seeks remedy as she desperately attempts to reclaim her own sanity.
I do see a lot of potential here. This other dimension offers a lot of possibilities. Maybe it would be too much for this logline, but I would assume she would want to find the one who gave her this drug? Perhaps he's the only one with the remedy? Why did he offer her this drug? Aside from the remedRead more
I do see a lot of potential here. This other dimension offers a lot of possibilities. Maybe it would be too much for this logline, but I would assume she would want to find the one who gave her this drug? Perhaps he’s the only one with the remedy? Why did he offer her this drug? Aside from the remedy, does she also want to exact revenge on the person who offered her the drug?
I’d also like to know how this dimension is driving her insane. Maybe say something like it’s a nightmare-filled dimension or something.
See lessThe paranormal cases led a spiritual scientist to a mysterious world – a place where Vietnamese folklores collide and reveal a terrible curse between the Dragon and Fairy families, where she will finally find her destiny.
This does sound like an interesting story.? I see it more as a fantasy rather than horror (which is the genre you put it in). The logline is a tad long and there is information that we really don't need. You don't need to write "paranormal" cases or name the type of families. Also, I'd like to knowRead more
This does sound like an interesting story.? I see it more as a fantasy rather than horror (which is the genre you put it in). The logline is a tad long and there is information that we really don’t need. You don’t need to write “paranormal” cases or name the type of families.
Also, I’d like to know more about her destiny. Is it to undo the curse that is set to the “Dragon” and “Fairy” families?
If it is, perhaps the logline could be something like:
“A spiritual scientist is pulled into a mysterious, fantasy-filled world where she must undo a curse that has plagued two families.”
See less?An advanced alien race threatens to enslave Earth in the 1500?s and humanity?s last hope lies in the unproven inventions of an Italian Renaissance artist who holds a dark secret.?
As a side note, more than one people whom I showed this logline to said this storyline reminds them a lot like the movie "Cowboys and Aliens". Not sure if that's good or bad.
As a side note, more than one people whom I showed this logline to said this storyline reminds them a lot like the movie “Cowboys and Aliens”. Not sure if that’s good or bad.
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