1. Posted: July 30, 2012In:

    A Brilliant but reckless mechanic promises his dying brother that he will save the one girl who can cure a zombie-plague before the military kill her.

    djmc

    Sounds interesting, the facebook photos look really good. My only question is why do the military want to kill her? I think brevity works for loglines but it does seem a bit odd that the only person who can cure the plague is going to get killed by the people who should also be trying to cure it.

    Sounds interesting, the facebook photos look really good. My only question is why do the military want to kill her? I think brevity works for loglines but it does seem a bit odd that the only person who can cure the plague is going to get killed by the people who should also be trying to cure it.

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  2. Posted: July 24, 2012In:

    A 10,000 year old alien takes human form and becomes a super powerful paraplegic in his attempt to save the Earth from destruction.

    djmc

    Seems potentially interesting... though what destruction does the earth needed to be saved from?

    Seems potentially interesting… though what destruction does the earth needed to be saved from?

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  3. Posted: July 22, 2012In:

    When in 800 AD a business magnate frees warmongering breeders of Raptors to conquer the Holy Roman Empire, only the Charlemagne's elite troop Scara (minus those who joined the Raptor army) stands in their way.

    djmc

    I'd also recommend clarifying that the raptors are dinosaurs in the logline. Especially with your usage of the term Raptor army.

    I’d also recommend clarifying that the raptors are dinosaurs in the logline. Especially with your usage of the term Raptor army.

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