1. Posted: July 13, 2012In:

    a retired war man in a mental hospital, attacks the nurse while he hallucinates he still in the battlefield.

    djmc

    Yeah, this sounds like an interesting premise(for a short or something) but doesn't sound like a movie without additional information.

    Yeah, this sounds like an interesting premise(for a short or something) but doesn’t sound like a movie without additional information.

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  2. Posted: July 13, 2012In:

    Based on a true story, set 70,000 years ago about a smart female hunter elected to lead her tribe out of Africa. Climate change, death, starvation, wild animals, betrayal and war with another tribe all stand between them and the arc of history.

    djmc

    Ok rather then write a new logline. I'll change the arc of history bit to. "all stand between them and a fate which will change the entirety of the ever after"

    Ok rather then write a new logline. I’ll change the arc of history bit to. “all stand between them and a fate which will change the entirety of the ever after”

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  3. Posted: July 13, 2012In:

    70,000 years ago a young female hunter is elected to lead her tribe out of Africa. Death, starvation, wild animals and other humans all stand between them and the arc of history.

    djmc

    Ok thanks both, good points. I've updated the logline and added a new one. Let me know what you think.

    Ok thanks both, good points. I’ve updated the logline and added a new one. Let me know what you think.

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