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A trio of drag queens orchestrate a prison break to rescue their transgender roommate after she is wrongly incarcerated in a men’s facility.
The inciting incident of a logline should be in the beginning. Example:?When their transgender roommate is wrongly incarcerated in a men's prison, three drag queens must orchestrate a plan to break her out.?(22 words) Otherwise I think the concept is a nice twist on a well-trod story.
The inciting incident of a logline should be in the beginning.
Example:?When their transgender roommate is wrongly incarcerated in a men’s prison, three drag queens must orchestrate a plan to break her out.?(22 words)
Otherwise I think the concept is a nice twist on a well-trod story.
See lessAfter discovering he is not the sole orphaned victim of an inhuman creature that took his parents years ago, a college student must piece together how the orphans are connected before the creature strikes again.
"After discovering he is not the sole orphaned victim of an inhuman creature that took his parents years ago, a college student must piece together how they are connected before the creature strikes again." The inciting incident should be reworded, more specific. How does this event motivate the proRead more
“After discovering he is not the sole orphaned victim of an inhuman creature that took his parents years ago, a college student must piece together how they are connected before the creature strikes again.”
The inciting incident should be reworded, more specific. How does this event motivate the protagonist to pursue the goal? The rest of the logline is a bit confusing. Piece together how what is connected?
See lessAfter saving an mistreated puppy, a young doctor sets out forming new friendships, helping those in need.
A script-and a logline- should be about what the character is doing NOW. What is the conflict, what is the specific goal? Is there a specific patient he wishes to save?
A script-and a logline- should be about what the character is doing NOW. What is the conflict, what is the specific goal? Is there a specific patient he wishes to save?
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