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After his son is shot in a drive-by, a gangster must use his crippled werewolf abilities to kill the vengeful vampire who has been attacking his gang.
Well, you gotta tell the story you gotta tell, and I respect that.However, ?your plot is an origin story for a multiple feature franchise which is why I asked myself (and now you): who is the audience for the franchise? ?(For darn sure, that's going to be the 1st question on the mind of any producerRead more
Well, you gotta tell the story you gotta tell, and I respect that.
However, ?your plot is an origin story for a multiple feature franchise which is why I asked myself (and now you): who is the audience for the franchise? ?(For darn sure, that’s going to be the 1st question on the mind of any producer: ?what is going to give the story line legs?)
If I read the box-office returns rightly, the core audience for every tent-pole film franchise that is a going concern is the youth-YA audience. ?How does your middle-aged dad appeal to that demographic? ?(VOD series appears to be a different market. ?Which venue are you aiming for, 21st century ?VOD , or 20th century theaters.)
>>I alternate between male and female protagonists. This one just happens to fall on the male turn.
Okay, but I suggest staying open to possibilities and discoveries. ?(FWIW: ?I am systematic to the point of ?OCD. ? Like with the Hollywood murder mystery I am writing. ?I always conceived it with a male protagonist because of the autobiographical elements. ?But one day, my protagonist rebelled against my OCD, ?underwent a ?creative sex change operation, became a woman. ?And, wow, the dramatic possibilities expanded exponentially. )
Yes, the hook of your story is werewolf gangs vs. vampire gangs. (Which kind of makes other elements negotiable, contingent.) I like the Latino angle — that would definitely appeal to that demographic. ?So, what is the ethnic ID of the vampire gang?
See lessA rewrite: When a young Muslim woman and a none Muslim man falls in love, they fight for their lives, when her betrothed hunts them to revenge his and his family’s honor.
I like the general premise of the story, Benneth, a conflict of faith and culture. ?It is definitely an improvement over your previous versions?And it is definitely topical. I think Foxtrot25's suggestion is an improvement, but I would like a clarification as to whom you see as the protagonist in thRead more
I like the general premise of the story, Benneth, a conflict of faith and culture. ?It is definitely an improvement over your previous versions?And it is definitely topical.
I think Foxtrot25’s suggestion is an improvement, but I would like a clarification as to whom you see as the protagonist in the story, the woman or the man? ?From whose pov are you going to tell the story? (And am I correct to believe that the woman is part of a family that has recently immigrated to Norway?)
See lessA rewrite: When a young Muslim woman and a none Muslim man falls in love, they fight for their lives, when her betrothed hunts them to revenge his and his family’s honor.
Where is the story set? ? In what country/culture? ?In the present or in the past?
Where is the story set? ? In what country/culture? ?In the present or in the past?
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