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  1. Posted: February 15, 2017In: Historical

    A young Thomas Edison must win the top invention prize at the Worlds Fair to prove to his dream girl and her disapproving father that he is worthy before she marries a wealthy suitor.

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    Added an answer on February 15, 2017 at 6:33 am

    There's already a film in the works about Edison, "The Last Days of Night", ?adapted from the best-selling a book of the same name, a film that with a plot more faithful to historical events.

    There’s already a film in the works about Edison, “The Last Days of Night”, ?adapted from the best-selling a book of the same name, a film that with a plot more faithful to historical events.

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  2. Posted: February 14, 2017In: Student Loglines

    A group of criminals see their escape from prison when an infamous prison breaker arrive. The problem however : he doesn’t want to escape anymore.

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    Added an answer on February 15, 2017 at 12:46 am

    Taking the logline literally, it implies that the plot is about them trying to persuade escape artist to join in and help them escape. Now, I can see this working for a comedy sketch or a short or a sequence in a larger story -- but the length of an ?entire movie about them ?pleading with the escapeRead more

    Taking the logline literally, it implies that the plot is about them trying to persuade escape artist to join in and help them escape. Now, I can see this working for a comedy sketch or a short or a sequence in a larger story — but the length of an ?entire movie about them ?pleading with the escape artist?

    And even if he doesn’t want to escape, couldn’t he still advise them, mentor them?

    That he doesn’t want to try to escape anymore is a good complication as a part of a plot, but I don’t see it as the plot. ? What is the story really about? The dramatic question seems to be: ?what do they do when they can’t convince him to help them? ?Isn’t the answer, obviously, ?they go ahead and plan their own escape?

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  3. Posted: February 14, 2017In: Drama

    Two friend’s relationship turns hostile after one of them reveals their love for the other.

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    Added an answer on February 14, 2017 at 5:40 am

    >>>their love"Their' refers to "one of them" which means that grammatically it should ?say either "his love" or "her love'". ? ?Well, which one is it? And what becomes the objective goal as a result of the hostility?

    >>>their love

    “Their’ refers to “one of them” which means that grammatically it should ?say either “his love” or “her love'”. ? ?Well, which one is it?

    And what becomes the objective goal as a result of the hostility?

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