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A con-artist uses a spy?s stolen dummy credit card to repay a debt, but, when it disables every online banking system in the world, together they must trace the virus to its source before it disappears.
>> more questions raised than necessary.Indeed.Another technical quibble: ?"before the virus disappears' -- but that is, in effect, a solution to the problem! ?Once the virus is gone (How> -- does it self-destruct after XX hours?) ?the banking system can be rebooted. ?Just as when a virus dRead more
>> more questions raised than necessary.
Indeed.
Another technical quibble: ?”before the virus disappears’ — but that is, in effect, a solution to the problem! ?Once the virus is gone (How> — does it self-destruct after XX hours?) ?the banking system can be rebooted. ?Just as when a virus disappears from the human body, the cold clears up.
So “tracing the virus” doesn’t make sense as the objective goal. Although tracing the origin? of the virus might be a step along the way to the objective goal. ?Which is…?
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Others mileage may vary, but this logline raises more questions than curiosity in my mind. ?In order for the plot to take off, ?it has be credible to the audience that swiping a piece of plastic can unleash a virus. Which is quite a trick to pull off as viruses are unleashed by inserting packets ofRead more
Others mileage may vary, but this logline raises more questions than curiosity in my mind. ?In order for the plot to take off, ?it has be credible to the audience that swiping a piece of plastic can unleash a virus.
Which is quite a trick to pull off as viruses are unleashed by inserting packets of code into systems — not swiping pieces of plastic. ? So what’s the “magic”? There will have to an exposition scene early in the story explaining how it could happen. ?What’s the technical explanation?
And why would the spy possess it? ?Aren’t spies supposed to collect information — not destroy it?
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Agree with Zentaneous. It sets up an interesting Act 1 situation. ?Now what's the plot that arises out of the situation? ?It needs a (brief) description of Act 2 to be complete.
Agree with Zentaneous.
It sets up an interesting Act 1 situation. ?Now what’s the plot that arises out of the situation? ?It needs a (brief) description of Act 2 to be complete.
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