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  1. Posted: May 20, 2016In: Drama

    Haunted by the tragic loss of his estranged father, a young Samoan-American must choose between his corporate job or follow in his late father?s footsteps as the last in a long line of fire-knife dancers.

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    Added an answer on May 21, 2016 at 1:07 am

    Oh. ?Thanks for the clarification.I still think that the struggle after he makes his decision would make for a more interesting story than just the struggle to make the decision. ?For me, the short has the felt sense of a quickie. ?It teases, arouses and then ends without a satisfying climax to theRead more

    Oh. ?Thanks for the clarification.

    I still think that the struggle after he makes his decision would make for a more interesting story than just the struggle to make the decision. ?For me, the short has the felt sense of a quickie. ?It teases, arouses and then ends without a satisfying climax to the foreplay of the premise — dramatic interruptus. ?Just when the story gets interesting — it ends.

    FWIW. But other’s mileage may vary. ?And it’s your story.

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  2. Posted: May 21, 2016In: SciFi

    An angel living as a human being is brutalized by the police and now humanity must fight for its survival.

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    Added an answer on May 21, 2016 at 12:49 am

    As if in the last 6,000 plus years, the divine powers-that-be haven't been given enough provocation to exterminate our species? And the tipping point is one angel living under cover who gets roughed up? ?The punishment seem all out of proportion to the offense.

    As if in the last 6,000 plus years, the divine powers-that-be haven’t been given enough provocation to exterminate our species? And the tipping point is one angel living under cover who gets roughed up? ?The punishment seem all out of proportion to the offense.

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  3. Posted: May 20, 2016In: Drama

    Haunted by the tragic loss of his estranged father, a young Samoan-American must choose between his corporate job or follow in his late father?s footsteps as the last in a long line of fire-knife dancers.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 20, 2016 at 1:26 pm

    Does it take the length of a feature film -- 2 hrs. -- for him to make his choice? ?Or is the film about what happens after he makes his choice? ?What is the story really about? ?A man who can't make up his mind? ?Or about ?a man returning to his roots, embracing a heritage he forsook for the foolsRead more

    Does it take the length of a feature film — 2 hrs. — for him to make his choice? ?Or is the film about what happens after he makes his choice? ?What is the story really about? ?A man who can’t make up his mind? ?Or about ?a man returning to his roots, embracing a heritage he forsook for the fools gold glitter of a corporate career?

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