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After being pressured by the cops to turn informant a teen is sent on a run by her drug dealer boss, who is holding her younger sister, knowing this run will get her killed.
Whatever, she needs to be presented as a proactive protagonist. ?The logline needs to be framed in terms of her objective goal: outwit everyone to save herself and her sister.
Whatever, she needs to be presented as a proactive protagonist. ?The logline needs to be framed in terms of her objective goal: outwit everyone to save herself and her sister.
See lessAfter being pressured by the cops to turn informant a teen is sent on a run by her drug dealer boss, who is holding her younger sister, knowing this run will get her killed.
Agree that she's too passive, a victim being used by everybody. ?Which is okay for a setup, a baseline situation, but what does she do about it? ?How does she seize the initiative, extricate herself from her dilemma, save her sister and herself?
Agree that she’s too passive, a victim being used by everybody. ?Which is okay for a setup, a baseline situation, but what does she do about it? ?How does she seize the initiative, extricate herself from her dilemma, save her sister and herself?
See lessWhen America is pushed to the brink of civil war by terrorism, a president is forced to take drastic nuclear action, but in doing so kills the child of the deadliest man the world.
Yeah, so what? ?What is the plot that arises out of killing the son? ?Who is the protagonist and what becomes his objective goal?
Yeah, so what? ?What is the plot that arises out of killing the son? ?Who is the protagonist and what becomes his objective goal?
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