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A lawsuit for his wife?s injury offers a homeless group leader a ticket out? until a member of his flock threatens to testify. Now he must resort to extreme measure to stop him.
That they are homeless is the cause of their predicament; it's why they end up in a train station; they have no where else to dwell.However, I'm not so sure about them taking up temporary residence in a train station (unless it is an abandoned). ?If the story is set in U.S., ?generally speaking theyRead more
That they are homeless is the cause of their predicament; it’s why they end up in a train station; they have no where else to dwell.
However, I’m not so sure about them taking up temporary residence in a train station (unless it is an abandoned). ?If the story is set in U.S., ?generally speaking they would be considered vagrants. ?They might be able to loiter during the cay, but they would not allowed to stay overnight.
Why not leave them homeless on the street during a blizzard?
Setting it around the Xmas holiday season is okay; ?the story plays on the sentiments of the season.
See lessA man seeking love falls for a lady he will marry. When he walks in on his best friend sleeping with her, he then must make a choice to either walk away or get his revenge.
As Nir Shelter said. ?Loglines are about the plot and the plot is about the action that follows from the decision the protagonist makes, not about the protagonist deciding to decide. So what does the protagonist decide to do? ?What is the plot? ?What becomes the protagonist's objective goal as a resRead more
As Nir Shelter said. ?Loglines are about the plot and the plot is about the action that follows from the decision the protagonist makes, not about the protagonist deciding to decide.
So what does the protagonist decide to do? ?What is the plot? ?What becomes the protagonist’s objective goal as a result of discovering the infidelity?
(And if revenge, why only on his best friend? ?What about her? ?It takes 2 to tango.)
See lessA paranormal reporter hears rumours that some ghostly activity is happening at her former school. Being a skeptic, she heads out to defraud the rumours, only to discover that there is something eery happening everywhere in the school… except for the Janitor’s Room..
Alas, this is another incomplete logline. ?It is incomplete because it sets up a situation and an inciting incident in the form of a discovery, but it fails to follow through to completion with an objective goal -- what the protagonist must do as a result of her discovery.A logline is not the same aRead more
Alas, this is another incomplete logline. ?It is incomplete because it sets up a situation and an inciting incident in the form of a discovery, but it fails to follow through to completion with an objective goal — what the protagonist must do as a result of her discovery.
A logline is not the same as s movie blurb or teaser where you leave the reader dangling without any clear cut idea of where the story is going. ?A logline targets a different audience, movie makers rather than movie viewers.
The purpose of a blurb is to persuade movie viewers to invest $12-15 and 2 hours of their lives in your story. ?The purpose of a logline is to persuade movie makers to invest millions and 2 or more years of their lives in your story– they have more at stake and want to know more about specific elements: ?a clearly defined protagonist (with a flaw), a clearly defined objective goal, a clearly defined antagonist or obstacle, and serious stakes.
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