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A lawsuit for his wife?s injury offers a homeless group leader a ticket out? until a member of his flock threatens to testify. Now he must resort to extreme measure to stop him.
What does "take a stand" mean? ?How does that translate into a specific objective goal?And I don't recommend including statements about "re-examining values"... "merciless world" ... "human dignity", ?yada-yada. ?If you want to send a message about how lousy and unjust the world is-- use Instagram.Read more
What does “take a stand” mean? ?How does that translate into a specific objective goal?
And I don’t recommend including statements about “re-examining values”… “merciless world” … “human dignity”, ?yada-yada. ?If you want to send a message about how lousy and unjust the world is– use Instagram. ?It doesn’t belong in a logline.
I mean no disrespect for your passion for social justice nor am I discounting the seriousness of being homeless. ?As I said, I know first hand what it’s like. ?I’m ?just saying.
See lessIn 1915, after a promising Australian sprinter spurns athletic glory for military glory by enlisting in the Great War, he must survive the carnage of the doomed Gallipoli campaign in Turkey.
DylanK The logline I wrote is for the same 1981 film. ?What you cited from IMDB is the blurb. ?Blurbs are targeted at movie viewers. ?Loglines are targeted ?at movie makers, the money men and producers who finance and package movie projects. ?Different audiences with different interests. (And althouRead more
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The logline I wrote is for the same 1981 film. ?What you cited from IMDB is the blurb. ?Blurbs are targeted at movie viewers. ?Loglines are targeted ?at movie makers, the money men and producers who finance and package movie projects. ?Different audiences with different interests.
(And although ?Mel Gibson was the up and coming star, ?Mark Lee actually had the role of the main character; the film is framed around his story arc.)
Blurbs are designed to tease movie viewers into investing a couple of hours and ?$12-$15 dollars in watching the film. ?Loglines are designed to interest movie makers in investing 2 ?(or more) years of the lives and millions of dollars in producing the film.
See lessA lawsuit for his wife?s injury offers a homeless group leader a ticket out? until a member of his flock threatens to testify. Now he must resort to extreme measure to stop him.
It's an ensemble story. ?For the purpose of the plotting and a logline, even ensemble stories may benefit from having ?a "first among equals", a primary character. ?In this case, it could be one character who makes it his cause and responsibility to organize the group, keep them alive for the duratiRead more
It’s an ensemble story. ?For the purpose of the plotting and a logline, even ensemble stories may benefit from having ?a “first among equals”, a primary character. ?In this case, it could be one character who makes it his cause and responsibility to organize the group, keep them alive for the duration.
And to be homeless and destitute is to have an objective goal of merely surviving until the next day. ( I know; been there, done that.) ?It would be more obvious, however, and more dramatically compelling if they were on the streets rather than in a train station — if they had no place to take shelter from adverse circumstances ?like (as I suggested earlier) a blizzard.
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