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  1. Posted: October 5, 2015In: Drama

    Copernicus’ Secret: It takes a lifetime for Nicolaus Copernicus to re-write our understanding of the Universe but plagued by self-doubt and fear, he’s unwilling to publish until a Protestant Professor risks imprisonment to convince him to publish.

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    Added an answer on October 6, 2015 at 3:43 am

    This seems to ?be a drama about ideas. ? And I like stories built on a solid foundation of important ideas, of weighty themes. Like?"Copenhagen", the award-winning play and TV movie (2002) about the meeting between 2 giants of 20th century physics in 1941, Niels Bohr and Werner Heisenberg. ?Only "CoRead more

    This seems to ?be a drama about ideas. ? And I like stories built on a solid foundation of important ideas, of weighty themes.

    Like?”Copenhagen”, the award-winning play and TV movie (2002) about the meeting between 2 giants of 20th century physics in 1941, Niels Bohr and Werner Heisenberg. ?Only “Copenhagen” wasn’t just ?idle chat about quantum mechanics and complementarity. ?The stakes were enormous. Who would win the race to develop an atomic bomb? To the winner of the race might go victory in World War II.

    What are the stakes here? ?Why should the audience be concerned about whether or not Copernicus publishes his data and conclusions? ?What’s so important about “rewriting our understanding of the universe” in the historical context of that period?

    And who is the antagonist? ?Who is threatening imprisonment? ? Who stands to lose by Copernicus publishing? ?(And why — which loops back to the stakes.)

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: August 15, 2014In: Public

    A young sheriff returns home to where his outlaw mother was brutally killed to find the girl he grew up with now in charge and wanting the same for him.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 19, 2014 at 6:44 am

    Problem is that version of the logline seems to have 2 plots rather than one. And I don't see how the 1st one is logically, which is to say causally, linked to the latter. He takes on a strong-willed, ambitious woman because he doesn't get emotional catharsis from bringing his mother's murderer to jRead more

    Problem is that version of the logline seems to have 2 plots rather than one.

    And I don’t see how the 1st one is logically, which is to say causally, linked to the latter. He takes on a strong-willed, ambitious woman because he doesn’t get emotional catharsis from bringing his mother’s murderer to justice? Say what??

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  3. Posted: August 15, 2014In: Public

    A young sheriff returns home to where his outlaw mother was brutally killed to find the girl he grew up with now in charge and wanting the same for him.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 19, 2014 at 6:44 am

    Problem is that version of the logline seems to have 2 plots rather than one. And I don't see how the 1st one is logically, which is to say causally, linked to the latter. He takes on a strong-willed, ambitious woman because he doesn't get emotional catharsis from bringing his mother's murderer to jRead more

    Problem is that version of the logline seems to have 2 plots rather than one.

    And I don’t see how the 1st one is logically, which is to say causally, linked to the latter. He takes on a strong-willed, ambitious woman because he doesn’t get emotional catharsis from bringing his mother’s murderer to justice? Say what??

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