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When a rookie martial artist’s first covert target is to eliminate innocent children, she refuses to complete the mission and must fight the deadly forces tracking them down and find the truth of their identities.
Yqwertz is on the mark. A logline has to suspend disbelief.? A logline reader doesn't have to know how it all makes sense, but he has to be willing to go along with the "what if..?" premise.? But I, too, am unable to suspend disbelief that a villain would intentionally want to kill innocent childrenRead more
Yqwertz is on the mark.
A logline has to suspend disbelief.? A logline reader doesn’t have to know how it all makes sense, but he has to be willing to go along with the “what if..?” premise.? But I, too, am unable to suspend disbelief that a villain would intentionally want to kill innocent children.? Not without knowing for what motivates him (like he’s a rabid Hitlerian racist).? But no motivation is given.
And if I knew the villain’s motivation, I don’t understand why he would recruit an unproven rookie to do a job that requires the services of? tried and tested, hard-hearted, vicious veteran.
And as noted, the stated objective goal lacks closure, is off the mark.? Finding out who the bad guys are is only a step toward the objective goal, a means to her desired end.? Which is?
See lessAfter her fathers’ death, a guilt-ridden athlete hires a hitman to execute her own murder? to pay off the family debt but struggles with the consequences of her deadly decision after meeting an inquisitive kid.
I can understand why she would grieve the death of her father, but why is she feeling guilty?? ?And what's prevents her from calling off her executioner?? ?And she if she couldn't pay off the debt, where did she get the money to hire the hit man?
I can understand why she would grieve the death of her father, but why is she feeling guilty?? ?And what’s prevents her from calling off her executioner?? ?And she if she couldn’t pay off the debt, where did she get the money to hire the hit man?
See lessWhen a Bible Schoolteacher is brutalized by two racist cops, he must kill or be killed.
As mikepedley 85 said. How can he have superhero powers when he couldn't even defend himself?? What is the source of his power? And kill who? Reads like the origin story for an anti-superhero. I dunno.
As mikepedley 85 said.
How can he have superhero powers when he couldn’t even defend himself?? What is the source of his power?
And kill who?
Reads like the origin story for an anti-superhero.
I dunno.
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