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After a tragic death puts her family in financial jeopardy, a disgraced athlete partners with an old childhood friend to execute an insurance scheme that puts her on the wrong end of a revenge plot.
>>>After a tragic death puts her family in financial jeopardy,Who and how so? Because of medical bills not covered by insurance?? Please clarify. >>>disgraced athlete What kind of athlete? Basketball, football, or...?? Professional or...? >>>partners with an old childhoodRead more
>>>After a tragic death puts her family in financial jeopardy,Who and how so?
Because of medical bills not covered by insurance?? Please clarify.
>>>disgraced athlete
What kind of athlete? Basketball, football, or…?? Professional or…?
>>>partners with an old childhood friend to execute an insurance scheme that puts her on the wrong end of a revenge plot.
This sends mixed signals as to what is the story about.? What is the main dramatic question of the plot?? Is it about a scam or revenge?? If the latter, what does the insurance scam have to do with getting revenge?
The logline would benefit by being more specific and having a clearer focus. I suggest you run it through the logline generator app. The app is still in beta, but it’s a useful tool in shaping and sharpening a logline.
See lessWhen a disgraced schoolgirl is sent home, she finds her rural outback town dying. With everything hopeless, she sets about to remake the town, fighting with corrupt politicians, billionaire mining magnets and ?apathetic ?townspeople to create a prosperous future.
Great suggestion by yqwertz.? I would suggest the addition of one word:When she discovers an abandoned gold mine has contaminated the drinking water in her rural outback town, a disgraced school girl must expose the politicians who are covering it up before everyone falls ill.Something similar has aRead more
Great suggestion by yqwertz.? I would suggest the addition of one word:
When she discovers an abandoned gold mine has contaminated the drinking water in her rural outback town, a disgraced school girl must expose the politicians who are covering it up before everyone falls ill.
Something similar has actually happened in the rural Western community where I grew up.? Leachate of arsenic and? heavy metals into the river from an abandoned mine.? And it’s an? ongoing environmental hazard with abandoned mines all over the West.
See lessIs there any relationship between a story logline and script?
My analogy that the logline is the skeleton of the plot; the script is the skeleton fully fleshed out,? the arrangement of all the muscles and organs.-- characters, events, settings.
My analogy that the logline is the skeleton of the plot; the script is the skeleton fully fleshed out,? the arrangement of all the muscles and organs.– characters, events, settings.
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