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After her mother loses her battle with cancer, a grief stricken 13-year-old girl loses her faith in God and contemplates suicide.
A clarification? please:? how central to the story is the element of religious faith?? Is this a faith-based story? Is the story to be framed such that the girl must she recover her faith to find a reason to go on living?? Or...?Also, for the purposes of dramatic effect, I suggest she must do more tRead more
A clarification? please:? how central to the story is the element of religious faith?? Is this a faith-based story? Is the story to be framed such that the girl must she recover her faith to find a reason to go on living?? Or…?
Also, for the purposes of dramatic effect, I suggest she must do more than contemplate suicide.? There must be at least one scene where she stands on the edge of the cliff, about to jump (metaphorically), about to take the pills, slash her wrists — whatever her m.o. is to end her life.?? The story needs a 3rd Act climax,an ultimate crisis scene when all seems lost.? If not a suicide attempt, then what?
Also, if you haven’t seen it, I cannot recommend highly enough “Ordinary People” (1980), the best film ever made dramatizing a teenager’s struggle with suicide.
See lessWhen one of the last historical music venues closes, in a diversely changing city, a young band must help bring the spirit of Go-Go music to the forefront.
I get it that a young band would have a passion for and would want to revive interest in Go-Go music.? But I don't understand why they "must".? That the diversity mix of a city is changing is not a problem, a dramatic crisis that demands a remedy -- it's urban life.?? So why does it matter whether GRead more
I get it that a young band would have a passion for and would want to revive interest in Go-Go music.? But I don’t understand why they “must”.? That the diversity mix of a city is changing is not a problem, a dramatic crisis that demands a remedy — it’s urban life.?? So why does it matter whether Go-Go is popular — or pass??? What are the stakes that an audience can identify with and buy into?
That said, while the logline has a specific inciting incident, an historical musical venue closes, it lacks a specific objective goal.? “Must help bring the spirit of Go-Go music to the forefront” is vague,? a generality.? What is their game plan, their specific objective goal for reviving interest in Go-Go music?
See lessIn a futuristic world in which aging is prevented through the extraction of other people?s cells, a woman goes on a reluctant murder spree to maintain her youth and her marriage for her daughter ? only to find out her husband has a fetish toward older women.
>>>reluctant murder spree to maintain her youth Why?? Because the extraction method is illegal? Why can't younger people donate some cells, just like it's perfectly legit for people to donate a pint of their blood now?
>>>reluctant murder spree to maintain her youth
Why?? Because the extraction method is illegal? Why can’t younger people donate some cells, just like it’s perfectly legit for people to donate a pint of their blood now?
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