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When she starts being tormented by an evil force,? a business woman must seek help from her husband after he is committed to a psychiatric hospital for trying to open her third eye.
Billy14:I still have no idea what the objective goal is. In one simple sentence, what is it?And the husband is in the driver's seat of the plot, not the wife.? She's trapped in the back seat as a passenger in the plot vehicle. The logline should be so framed.
Billy14:
I still have no idea what the objective goal is. In one simple sentence, what is it?
And the husband is in the driver’s seat of the plot, not the wife.? She’s trapped in the back seat as a passenger in the plot vehicle. The logline should be so framed.
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Billy14:Thanks for the clarification.? As described, I get the impression that the plot is driving her, rather than she is driving the plot.? Things are happening to her and people are doing things to her. What agency does she have?? What free will is she exercising and to what end?? IOW: what becomRead more
Billy14:
Thanks for the clarification.? As described, I get the impression that the plot is driving her, rather than she is driving the plot.? Things are happening to her and people are doing things to her. What agency does she have?? What free will is she exercising and to what end?? IOW: what becomes her objective goal when the evil comes a knocking?? Is she seeking? a spiritual transformation or is it happening to her?? Who is in the drivers seat of the plot?? Driving to what destination?
What exactly must she win, stop, retrieve or escape from?? That is how the logline ought to be framed.
See lessWhen she starts being tormented by an evil force,? a business woman must seek help from her husband after he is committed to a psychiatric hospital for trying to open her third eye.
Finding a Dead Sea scroll is an interesting idea for an inciting incident.? However, film is a visual medium so there needs to be a visual moment corresponding to every element in a logline.? What's the visual for "spiritual transformation", the on screen cue that signals to the audience that she haRead more
Finding a Dead Sea scroll is an interesting idea for an inciting incident.? However, film is a visual medium so there needs to be a visual moment corresponding to every element in a logline.? What’s the visual for “spiritual transformation”, the on screen cue that signals to the audience that she has undergone the transformation. ( What does “opening her third eye” look like on a movie screen?)
Further, loglines are about external objective goals, events, actions or objects that an audience can see — again a visual.? Loglines are not about inner states of mind or changes (“spiritual transformation”) because those are invisible to a movie viewer.
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