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  1. Posted: October 30, 2019In: Action

    A crazed sidekick searching for a new villain sets her sights on a mild-mannered journalist with a powerful secret.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 30, 2019 at 6:40 am

    I suggest running the logline through the site logline generator. (Oh, "and sets her sights" is rather vague, uninformative.? What is her specific objective goal?)

    I suggest running the logline through the site logline generator.

    (Oh, “and sets her sights” is rather vague, uninformative.? What is her specific objective goal?)

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  2. Posted: October 30, 2019In: Action

    A crazed sidekick searching for a new villain sets her sights on a mild-mannered journalist with a powerful secret.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on October 30, 2019 at 6:09 am

    Sidekick to who?? What is her role, her regular job?Why is she searching for a new villain?? Out of spite, out of malevalence, out of boredom, or....?Does she know the journalist;s secret?? If not, then what motivates her to target him?

    Sidekick to who?? What is her role, her regular job?

    Why is she searching for a new villain?? Out of spite, out of malevalence, out of boredom, or….?

    Does she know the journalist;s secret?? If not, then what motivates her to target him?

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  3. Posted: October 25, 2019In: Drama

    As she attempts another comeback, a bottom of the bottle b list movie queen recounts her rise to the top.

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    Added an answer on October 26, 2019 at 12:56 pm

    A logline is a summary of the plot.? And a plot faces forward in time, not backwards.? A plot is about where a character wants to go in the future, not where she's been in the past.Flashbacks may serve a purpose in the script to explain how the character came to be washed up,. But the logline shouldRead more

    A logline is a summary of the plot.? And a plot faces forward in time, not backwards.? A plot is about where a character wants to go in the future, not where she’s been in the past.

    Flashbacks may serve a purpose in the script to explain how the character came to be washed up,. But the logline should be framed in terms of and focus on her future goal, her struggle for a comeback.

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