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An ex-con, out to kill a reformed paedophile, falls for the man?s protective sister.
"Abusive past"? is? general.? It's not clear that he was sexaully abused.? He could have been physically abused -- beaten -- by a tyrannical father.? Or emotionally abused by a lousy mother.? Or both in combination.In order for the reader to understand his motivation, you gotta be specific.And I staRead more
“Abusive past”? is? general.? It’s not clear that he was sexaully abused.? He could have been physically abused — beaten — by a tyrannical father.? Or emotionally abused by a lousy mother.? Or both in combination.
In order for the reader to understand his motivation, you gotta be specific.
And I stand? by my previous suggestion.
See lessAn ex-con, out to kill a reformed paedophile, falls for the man?s protective sister.
I think it would be more dramatically compelling if he was a youthful victim of the man he wants to kill.? Now the stakes are personal.? And now the audience can more readily sympathize with his motivation.? And it heightens the conflict between his feelings for the man and his feelings for the sistRead more
I think it would be more dramatically compelling if he was a youthful victim of the man he wants to kill.? Now the stakes are personal.? And now the audience can more readily sympathize with his motivation.? And it heightens the conflict between his feelings for the man and his feelings for the sister.
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See lessAn ex-con, out to kill a reformed paedophile, falls for the man?s protective sister.
Why does the ex-con feel he MUST murder the pedophile given that he's reformed?? Why would an audience be sympathize with his goal?
Why does the ex-con feel he MUST murder the pedophile given that he’s reformed?? Why would an audience be sympathize with his goal?
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