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A group of subjects in a sleep experiment are stalked by multidimensional entities awakened to rip their spirits apart.
The logline sets up a situation for a plot but doesn't follow through with a complete plot.? More to the point, it doesn't designate the inciting incident? that sets the plot in motion.? Nor does it indicate who the protagonist is nor what the objective goal is, what he/she must do to overcome the pRead more
The logline sets up a situation for a plot but doesn’t follow through with a complete plot.? More to the point, it doesn’t designate the inciting incident? that sets the plot in motion.? Nor does it indicate who the protagonist is nor what the objective goal is, what he/she must do to overcome the predicament. ? The logline merely presents them as hapless victims.
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See lessA discredited private investigator has a chance at redemption after the missing dead body of his enemies child who happens to be his former boss.
The sentence is a bit complicated and incomplete, missing a verb,? so I'm not sure what the story is about.? I'm guessing what you meant to say was something like "after the body of his enemy's child is found..." -- that is the inciting incident. In any event, what are the stakes?? He's already on tRead more
The sentence is a bit complicated and incomplete, missing a verb,? so I’m not sure what the story is about.? I’m guessing what you meant to say was something like “after the body of his enemy’s child is found…” — that is the inciting incident.
In any event, what are the stakes?? He’s already on the outs with his former boss.? What more does he stand to lose if he doesn’t solve the murder?? ?Is the ex-boss out to kill him?? And what does he stand to gain by solving the murder?? In other words, what does redemption mean concretely?? Does he get his job back?? Does he regain favor with his former boss?? Is his life no longer in mortal danger?
See lessAn entire town wakes up with dissociative amnesia and is told to be a part of a voluntary social experiment; when one member of the town begins to suspect they are being held against their will, he launches a secret investigation to rediscover his past.
What will rediscovering his past accomplish?? IOW:? what is his objective goal in terms of changing his present situation?
What will rediscovering his past accomplish?? IOW:? what is his objective goal in terms of changing his present situation?
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