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  1. Posted: May 3, 2019In: Adventure

    After living as a hermit for many years, Lyn rediscover the world through the delivery of a mysterious object. He wonders why he is pushing this huge box. When he needs to understand what pushes him.

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    Added an answer on May 4, 2019 at 4:57 am

    Agree with Aidan.? I have no idea what the? plot of the story is.? Please review the guidelines for composing an industry acceptable logline under "Our Formula".

    Agree with Aidan.? I have no idea what the? plot of the story is.? Please review the guidelines for composing an industry acceptable logline under “Our Formula”.

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  2. Posted: May 3, 2019In: Comedy

    After a graduate student is asked to identify a body?his pot-dealer?s, he enlists the help of two other clients to give the man a proper burial.

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    Added an answer on May 4, 2019 at 2:51 am

    Sound like an interesting seed idea for a story.? ?But what it may grow into, I don't? know. Have you ever asked your husband WHY he didn't open it?Be that as it may, I suggest? the principle of "Chekhov's gun"? applies.? ?If a gun is introduced in the 1st Act,? it has to be fired in the 2nd.? By exRead more

    Sound like an interesting seed idea for a story.? ?But what it may grow into, I don’t? know. Have you ever asked your husband WHY he didn’t open it?

    Be that as it may, I suggest? the principle of “Chekhov’s gun”? applies.? ?If a gun is introduced in the 1st Act,? it has to be fired in the 2nd.? By extrapolation, if you’re going to introduce? the envelope as an important prop in the 1st Act, you have to pay it off by the end of the film.

    How do you want to pay it off?

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  3. Posted: April 11, 2019In: Comedy

    A crazy caveman from a forest tribe accidentally ends up in 18th century London, he must find a way to get back home before he becomes an exhibit at the museum of history.

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    Added an answer on April 11, 2019 at 10:12 pm

    As Richiev said.? And the jeopardy doesn't make sense either.? ?Once they figure out who he is, the last thing modern scientists would want to do is stuff him like a trophy animal and put him in a museum.? And how does anyone know he's from another epoch?? ?Why would they believe that he accidentallRead more

    As Richiev said.? And the jeopardy doesn’t make sense either.? ?Once they figure out who he is, the last thing modern scientists would want to do is stuff him like a trophy animal and put him in a museum.? And how does anyone know he’s from another epoch?? ?Why would they believe that he accidentally time tripped from to the present?

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