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When a prominent black surgeon in New York does a DNA test to find his family he finds out that he is from a small community of great hunters in ‘Arnhem Land. His life is thrust into chaos when he must cast off the silken symbols of civilization, to become the man, the hunter, the person he has been yearning for his entire life.
Ozymale59: Based upon? the additional information you provided, here is a 25 word version: When DNA testing reveals that a Black American is really descended from Australian aborigines, he abandons modern life to become a paleo-hunter in the Outback. As someone who gets hung up on the credibility ofRead more
Ozymale59:
Based upon? the additional information you provided, here is a 25 word version:
When DNA testing reveals that a Black American is really descended from Australian aborigines, he abandons modern life to become a paleo-hunter in the Outback.
As someone who gets hung up on the credibility of story ideas, I find it completely credible? that an Australian Aborigine could “pass” or be mistaken for a Black in the United States.
This is a movie I want to see.? Very best wishes with your script.
See lessWhen a prominent black surgeon in New York does a DNA test to find his family he finds out that he is from a small community of great hunters in ‘Arnhem Land. His life is thrust into chaos when he must cast off the silken symbols of civilization, to become the man, the hunter, the person he has been yearning for his entire life.
Now that you've clarified the concept:When a sophisticated Black American professional discovers through a DNA test that he has aboriginal heritage, he abandons his comfortable, secure lifestyle to become a paleo-hunter in the Outback.(29 words)An interesting concept. Since you ID him as a Black AmeRead more
Now that you’ve clarified the concept:
When a sophisticated Black American professional discovers through a DNA test that he has aboriginal heritage, he abandons his comfortable, secure lifestyle to become a paleo-hunter in the Outback.
(29 words)
An interesting concept. Since you ID him as a Black American,? I presume you have good explanation why he doesn’t become a paleo-hunter in? Africa instead.
While having the protagonist as a surgeon may come in handy in the script. for a stituation where he must treat an injury in the Outback (without modern technology), I don’t deem it necessary for the logline.? In the logline, I suggest that the more important dramatic dynamic to emphasize is the contrast between the comfort and security of? his current lifestyle and discomforts and insecurity of a primitive lifestyle,
See lessA rider girl’s goal to link up her motorcycle from the USA west to the east coast threatens in a serious wreck, but her soulmate inspires her to bounce back, and throws a challenge to achieve her goal in quest of him.
Shiva: I am still unclear what the story is you want to tell.? I gather romance is in the mix, but I remain uncertain as to the plot.? ?"To link up her motorcycle from the USA west to the east coast"? is confusing.? What does that mean?? That her goal is to cycle from coast to coast?? In a rally, aRead more
Shiva:
I am still unclear what the story is you want to tell.? I gather romance is in the mix, but I remain uncertain as to the plot.? ?”To link up her motorcycle from the USA west to the east coast”? is confusing.? What does that mean?? That her goal is to cycle from coast to coast?? In a rally, a race?? Solo?? Or with? her soulmate?? ?What’s at stake in that goal?
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