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  1. Posted: September 17, 2017In: Horror

    When a group of argonauts go missing during the California Gold Rush, a solitary hunter must lead a relief party to the claim where a dangerous beast guards a vast fortune.

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    Added an answer on September 17, 2017 at 5:05 am

    Argonauts usually refers the men who sailed with Jason in search of the Gold Fleece in distant, mythological times. The use of the term in the time setting of the 19th century California Gold Rush is confusing. ?Please clarify. ?Is this story a 19th century re-telling/reworking of that ancient myth,Read more

    Argonauts usually refers the men who sailed with Jason in search of the Gold Fleece in distant, mythological times. The use of the term in the time setting of the 19th century California Gold Rush is confusing. ?Please clarify. ?Is this story a 19th century re-telling/reworking of that ancient myth, or what?

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  2. Posted: September 13, 2017In: Horror

    A relief party of argonauts is assembled to reestablish correspondence with a gold claim in the mountains of California where a terrible beast sentinels a vast fortune.

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    Added an answer on September 13, 2017 at 9:50 am

    >> "reestablish correspondence with a gold claim..." What does that mean? ??What is that supposed to accomplish? And after they do reestablish correspondence -- whatever that means -- ?then what? ?What is the specific objective goal? ?And who among the relief party is the leader? ?Who is the pRead more

    >> “reestablish correspondence with a gold claim…”

    What does that mean? ??What is that supposed to accomplish?

    And after they do reestablish correspondence — whatever that means — ?then what? ?What is the specific objective goal? ?And who among the relief party is the leader? ?Who is the protagonist?

    >> “sentinels”

    Better to just say “guards”.

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2017In: Drama

    When allegations prompt a rising Senior to permanently leave home, he must feign loyalty to a commune that hides him so he can attain residency there and take his GED.

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    Added an answer on September 7, 2017 at 4:42 am

    >>We?ve seen that quite a bit.Not convincingly, imho. ?Whatever.If you wish to portray him as initially faking it, will he become drunk on the power his charisma gives him over the commune? ?Again, what is his character vulnerability, his personal psychological Achilles heel, ?being exposed byRead more

    >>We?ve seen that quite a bit.

    Not convincingly, imho. ?Whatever.

    If you wish to portray him as initially faking it, will he become drunk on the power his charisma gives him over the commune? ?Again, what is his character vulnerability, his personal psychological Achilles heel, ?being exposed by hanging around in the commune? ?What is the story about his character that you propose to tell by dropping him into this context? ?What is the audience supposed to worry about?

    It seems to me like ?the cards are stacked in his favor during his layover in the commune. ?When the cards should be stacked against him. ?I don’t see anything to worry about. ?Just saying.

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