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A washed-up news anchor and self-help aficionado, Buck Walsh, finds what may be the saving grace of his career: the lost family home videos from an unsolved double homicide. But watching all 50 minutes of the found footage extravaganza unleashes paranormal forces inside Channel 93’s Public Access TV studio. Buck must put his self-help lessons to the test and discover the demon’s true identity before he becomes the next victim.
The logline is too long, too complicated and utterly confusing. ?Simplify, summarize, shorten. And how will finding out the demon's true identity save his life?
The logline is too long, too complicated and utterly confusing. ?Simplify, summarize, shorten.
And how will finding out the demon’s true identity save his life?
See lessA superstitious woman believes she is being haunted by her psychopathic brother after having visions of his crimes but when her sister remarks that he was only carrying on the legacy of their father, she starts to investigate their mysterious family background.
Okay, but that's all backstory. ?What's the story going forward? What's the dramatic problem now? that the woman must confront and resolve? ?What is her objective goal for solving the problem? ?Who or what opposes her? ?And what are the stakes-- what does she stand to lose or suffer-- if she fails?
Okay, but that’s all backstory. ?What’s the story going forward? What’s the dramatic problem now? that the woman must confront and resolve? ?What is her objective goal for solving the problem? ?Who or what opposes her? ?And what are the stakes– what does she stand to lose or suffer– if she fails?
See lessA superstitious woman believes she is being haunted by her psychopathic brother after having visions of his crimes but when her sister remarks that he was only carrying on the legacy of their father, she starts to investigate their mysterious family background.
>>she starts to investigate their mysterious family ?background. To what end? ?IOW: ?what is her objective goal in investigating the family skeleton closet? And what are the stakes? ?What does she stand to gain ? ?What does she stand to lose? The inciting incident -- her sister's remark -- seeRead more
>>she starts to investigate their mysterious family ?background.
To what end? ?IOW: ?what is her objective goal in investigating the family skeleton closet?
And what are the stakes? ?What does she stand to gain ? ?What does she stand to lose?
The inciting incident — her sister’s remark — seems rather weak for an inciting incident. ?It’s a reveal and a reveal can be an inciting incident, but “legacy of their father” is rather vague. ?What’s the legacy? ?What’s the specific problem of the past haunting their present?
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