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  1. Posted: April 26, 2016In: Examples

    Brilliant but eccentric mathematician Alan Turing and a team of code-breakers race against time to turn the tide of World War II by doing the impossible: decrypt the Nazi communications code.

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    Added an answer on April 27, 2016 at 11:18 pm

    The scripted story begins just after World War II breaks out. ?So I suppose that would be the inciting incident. And the script and film open in 1951 with the robbery in his home. ?And then flashback to the war period. ? Which goes to show that a logline isn't always about how the film opens, but abRead more

    The scripted story begins just after World War II breaks out. ?So I suppose that would be the inciting incident.

    And the script and film open in 1951 with the robbery in his home. ?And then flashback to the war period. ? Which goes to show that a logline isn’t always about how the film opens, but about the through line that drives the story.

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  2. Posted: April 26, 2016In: Examples

    The true story of how King George VI overcame his humiliating stammer to rally the English people in the dark days of World War II.

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    Added an answer on April 27, 2016 at 10:47 pm

    You make a good point, Nir Shelter. ?But the thing of it is, the abdication doesn't happen until almost 2/3 of the way through the scripted story. ?(Although, it is well-foreshadowed.) ?So how does that qualify as the inciting incident?It's seems to me that if the abdication is an inciting incident,Read more

    You make a good point, Nir Shelter. ?But the thing of it is, the abdication doesn’t happen until almost 2/3 of the way through the scripted story. ?(Although, it is well-foreshadowed.) ?So how does that qualify as the inciting incident?

    It’s seems to me that if the abdication is an inciting incident, it does indeed “shake up his world”, in that it sets up the supreme crisis, when Bertie is ?forced to confront his stammer head on. He’s been wrestling with it for years, now he must rise to the occasion, to the supreme crisis in his life and in the history of Great Britain with ?a radio address. ?He will either succeed or suffer humiliation and failure before an worldwide audience of millions.

    But ?technically, it’s not the inciting incident for his struggle to overcome his stammer. ?The scripted story begins in media res in terms of ?his personal problem. ?He’s been struggling to overcome his stammer all his life. The inciting incident occurs when Bertie’s wife, Princess Elizabeth, solicits the help of Lionel Logue, a speech therapist. to do what no one else has been able to do. ?

    Your?version puts the spotlight (and rightly so!) on the stakes, what gives the story its historical and dramatic import. ?He must achieve a personal victory in order to to rally the English people to ?national victory over?Nazi Germany.

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  3. Posted: April 27, 2016In: Comedy

    A drunken priest joins forces with a theater director to create a new religion, pushing his successful Church Of Bingo into battle with all denominations for disciples.

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    Added an answer on April 27, 2016 at 9:24 pm

    Because it's a comedy, ?I am more willing to suspend disbelief on how the story is set up. My primary question is: ?so what? ?What's at stake? ?What is the story trying to show, to say about religion that ?would make it worthwhile for me to invest some of my precious time and limited money in watchiRead more

    Because it’s a comedy, ?I am more willing to suspend disbelief on how the story is set up.

    My primary question is: ?so what? ?What’s at stake? ?What is the story trying to show, to say about religion that ?would make it worthwhile for me to invest some of my precious time and limited money in watching this movie? What’s the dramatic point? ?What theme are you ?trying explore that I might find amusing, if not enlightening?

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