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After accepting the reality of being raped by a woman, a reformed demigod assassin tries to deal with his depression by getting back into the business of hunting people who bear the Chimera Mark.
So now the protagonist's objective goal is to find out the meaning of the mark that has appeared on his own body? ?What's at stake? ?What's the upside if he can figure the meaning of the mysterious mark on his own body? ?What's the downside if he can't? ?And who is his mortal enemy, his nemesis?TheRead more
So now the protagonist’s objective goal is to find out the meaning of the mark that has appeared on his own body? ?What’s at stake? ?What’s the upside if he can figure the meaning of the mysterious mark on his own body? ?What’s the downside if he can’t?
?And who is his mortal enemy, his nemesis?
The protagonist seems to be an anti-hero. ?Is the audience supposed to root for him or just be fascinated–but hope he is ultimately defeated?
See lessThis is not a logline but a question. Will it be admissible for a logline for a SERIES be longer than a standard of 30 words (or so)?
FWIW: ?Results of ?a survey of 675 randomly selected loglines for stories that cleared all the hurdles and actually got made into movies. ?From which I conclude that the 25-words-or-less guideline is more than an intuitive rule of thumb; it rests on a sound statistical basis. ?The survey also revealRead more
FWIW: ?Results of ?a survey of 675 randomly selected loglines for stories that cleared all the hurdles and actually got made into movies. ?
From which I conclude that the 25-words-or-less guideline is more than an intuitive rule of thumb; it rests on a sound statistical basis. ?
The survey also revealed that loglines between 25-30 words were infrequent. ?Loglines exceeding 35 words are rare and ?none–nada, zero, zilch — exceeded 40 words.
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See lessAfter accepting the reality of being raped by a woman, a reformed demigod assassin tries to deal with his depression by getting back into the business of hunting people who bear the Chimera Mark.
"Accepting the reality of being raped by a woman" translates into "recovering from being raped by a woman". ?That ?could be a great inciting incident for a story. ?But I ?have no idea how it works as the inciting incident for this story.What is a reformed "demigod"? ? What does that mean? How is itRead more
“Accepting the reality of being raped by a woman” translates into “recovering from being raped by a woman”. ?That ?could be a great inciting incident for a story. ?But I ?have no idea how it works as the inciting incident for this story.
What is a reformed “demigod”? ? What does that mean? How is it possible for a demigod, male or female, be a rape victim? ?Doesn’t the demigod status give them special powers or strength to prevail against any would-be rapist?
And what is the “Chimera Mark”? Okay, I can google and find out — but I shouldn’t have to. ?A logline has to be self-explanatory. ?And it should raise curiosity — not questions and puzzlement as it does does in my mind. ??(Others’ mileage may vary.)
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