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  1. Posted: April 24, 2016In: Examples

    After the king asks him to serve as his advisor, the lord of the North discovers the murder plot of his predecessor as an attempt to cover up the heir’s illegitimate claim to the throne.

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    Added an answer on April 25, 2016 at 12:41 am

    A respectable logline for the pilot season. But I doubt that ?"Game of Thrones" series was sold on the basis of a logline. ? ?It was probably sold on the basis of its source, the series of fantasy novels by George R.R. Martin. ?The popularity of the series and the video games based upon the series dRead more

    A respectable logline for the pilot season.

    But I doubt that ?”Game of Thrones” series was sold on the basis of a logline. ? ?It was probably sold on the basis of its source, the series of fantasy novels by George R.R. Martin. ?The popularity of the series and the video games based upon the series demonstrated the premise had “legs” for becoming a commercially viable series. ?I doubt that a ?standard logline was necessary.

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  2. Posted: April 24, 2016In: Horror

    300 years ago, the Penitente rose from the ashes of the Pueblo Revolts. Today Diana believes her family’s dark past has caught up to her when the body of a crucified man is found in the desert.

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    Added an answer on April 25, 2016 at 12:34 am

    As the others said. ?What does it mean that "her family's dark past has caught up to her"? ? ?That's vague and ?it's back story. How does that back story translate into a specific objective goal going forward in the present time of the film narrative? ? Who is the antagonist? ?What's at stake?

    As the others said. ?What does it mean that “her family’s dark past has caught up to her”? ? ?That’s vague and ?it’s back story. How does that back story translate into a specific objective goal going forward in the present time of the film narrative? ? Who is the antagonist? ?What’s at stake?

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  3. Posted: April 24, 2016In: Thriller

    Whenever a pain in the ass hitman sleeps, he always wakes up to a new future in the middle of his next hit until he decides to stay up and abandon mission, and discovers a thieves? guild?s plot to rob Big Pharm of a drug that grants immortal health, no sleep required.

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    Added an answer on April 25, 2016 at 12:29 am

    Yeah, too complicated. ? ?I'm intrigued by a hit man who always wakes up in the middle of his next hit, but the rest of it just doesn't seem make sense. To really score big, the thieves have to steal the formula -- not just the drug ---so they can reproduce a generic knock-off. ?But isn't that justRead more

    Yeah, too complicated. ? ?I’m intrigued by a hit man who always wakes up in the middle of his next hit, but the rest of it just doesn’t seem make sense.

    To really score big, the thieves have to steal the formula — not just the drug —so they can reproduce a generic knock-off. ?But isn’t that just a matter of chemistry? ?All they need is to analyze a sample and then replicate it?

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