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  1. Posted: January 8, 2020In: Horror

    Introverted twins move to a new town where they endure (racially motivated) harassment; one finally decided to fight back.

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on January 9, 2020 at 6:54 am

    (No need for parentheses.) Specifically how do they intend to fight back?? What's their game plan, their m.o.?? What is their ultimate objective goal? What's the story hook?? What is fresh and new, what sets this apart from all the other movie plots about people avenging an injury or injustice?

    (No need for parentheses.)

    Specifically how do they intend to fight back?? What’s their game plan, their m.o.?? What is their ultimate objective goal?

    What’s the story hook?? What is fresh and new, what sets this apart from all the other movie plots about people avenging an injury or injustice?

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  2. Posted: January 8, 2020In: Drama

    After the die-hard romantic paramour of a married woman is asked to help kill her abusive stepfather, he plans the perfect murder but when he discovers she is using him as a pawn, heartbroken, he plots his revenge.

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    Added an answer on January 9, 2020 at 6:47 am

    What's the story hook? The story hook in "Les Diaboliques" is that the conspirators execute the perfect murder plan -- and then the corpse disappears.? And the corpse needs to be discovered for their plan to work.

    What’s the story hook?

    The story hook in “Les Diaboliques” is that the conspirators execute the perfect murder plan — and then the corpse disappears.? And the corpse needs to be discovered for their plan to work.

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  3. Posted: January 3, 2020In: Examples

    When a man wakes up in an unfamiliar bar with no memories, he is compelled to solve the mystery and reconsider his own relationship with death.

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    Added an answer on January 9, 2020 at 6:37 am

    >>>Consider his relationship with? death?Vague, needs clarity. Specifically, what does that mean in terms of what he must do?And a plot is organized around one prime objective goal.? Not two.? Just one.? A logline is about the struggle to achieve that one goal. All other goals are secondaryRead more

    >>>Consider his relationship with? death?

    Vague, needs clarity. Specifically, what does that mean in terms of what he must do?

    And a plot is organized around one prime objective goal.? Not two.? Just one.? A logline is about the struggle to achieve that one goal. All other goals are secondary and subordinate to the prime goal — and extraneous to a loglne.

    So what is his singular primary goal: solve the mystery or “consider his relationship with death” (whatever that means)?

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    And does this refer to a movie already made?? Because that’s what? “examples” are for.

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