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  1. Posted: February 23, 2016In: Comedy

    An entrepreneurial high schooler begins selling sex toys to neighborhood parents to raise money for a car but when his kid sister is diagnosed with cancer, he turns it into a fundraising campaign – with an increasing number of his classmates – to pay for her treatments.

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    Added an answer on February 23, 2016 at 4:18 am

    I realize this is a comedy. ?And comedies skewer rational thinking; they ?often require a suspense of disbelief as to the logic of the premise.But I, for one, am unable to suspend disbelief that parents, adults, would buy sex toys face to face from a kid, from someone who ?knows them, ?be privy to tRead more

    I realize this is a comedy. ?And comedies skewer rational thinking; they ?often require a suspense of disbelief as to the logic of the premise.

    But I, for one, am unable to suspend disbelief that parents, adults, would buy sex toys face to face from a kid, from someone who ?knows them, ?be privy to their fetishes and kinks. ?Especially when these days, the same ?parents can browse and procure ?intimate items in privacy (and maybe cheaper) over the Internet. ?Other’s mileage may vary.

    fwiw.

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  2. Posted: February 22, 2016In: Comedy

    When an insecure screenwriter writing a screenplay about Al Capone is captured by Capone himself, he must escape the gangster’s clutches before he is tortured into writing a screenplay he hates and shot in the head.

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    Added an answer on February 23, 2016 at 1:13 am

    What about a more contemporary story about a 2nd-tier, minor league?gangster, who idolizes Al Capone, who wants the screenwriter to produce a script for a reality series that will elevate him to the 1st tier, major leagues, will bring him the celebrity status? like Capone enjoyed? An updating of oneRead more

    What about a more contemporary story about a 2nd-tier, minor league?gangster, who idolizes Al Capone, who wants the screenwriter to produce a script for a reality series that will elevate him to the 1st tier, major leagues, will bring him the celebrity status? like Capone enjoyed?

    An updating of one of the premises of the classic movie?”Network”,? perhaps, but?maybe it’s time.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: February 20, 2016In: SciFi

    Rio, a waitress in a small Texas town, graduated high school last week, survived being burned alive yesterday and today discovered the reason why. She is descended from Quetzalcoatl, Aztec god of Light and Knowledge and their bloodline has been hunted by rival god, Tezcatlipoca, Aztec god of War and his descendants for millennia. After learning more about her lineage, Rio decides to take the fight to the enemy and make the hunters the prey.

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    Added an answer on February 21, 2016 at 12:38 pm

    >>>After learning more about her lineage, Rio decides to take the fight to the enemy and make the hunters the prey.This is not as strong as the?previous iteration where??the rival Aztec? gods were trying to wipe out her and her bloodline making the conflict? as personal as it can get. ConseRead more

    >>>After learning more about her lineage, Rio decides to take the fight to the enemy and make the hunters the prey.

    This is not as strong as the?previous iteration where??the rival Aztec? gods were trying to wipe out her and her bloodline making the conflict? as personal as it can get. Consequently, she takes up the fight because she must, the stakes are as high as they can get for her – it’s do or die.

    And I don’t think she has to be a librarian.? I think waitress is better.? The more?humble the origins of the character, the?greater the character arc. ??Luke Skywalker was just?a country boy?until….

    And how does she find out what the strife means and her destiny???The same way Luke did: ?with the timely training of a mentor.

    And better than a fianc?e — who may not be in the bloodline — would be her family, who are in the bloodline.? After all, isn’t that the objective goal of the rival gods, to wipe out her bloodline?

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