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  1. Posted: February 24, 2016In: Family

    Son of an Indian couple – who deeply believes in Gandhian ideals of nonviolence, accidentally kills a powerful man to protect his father. While the family on run, the son and father fiercely stands against each other?s way to fight out the enemy.

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    Added an answer on February 25, 2016 at 5:47 am

    It's no mystery to me why in that culture the whole family must flee because of the mistake of one member.But the logline is confusing to me?on several points:Is it the son (only) who believes in Gandhi's??non-violence teaching.? Or the father?? Or both?And does the whole family flee? Or do the fathRead more

    It’s no mystery to me why in that culture the whole family must flee because of the mistake of one member.

    But the logline is confusing to me?on several points:

    Is it the son (only) who believes in Gandhi’s??non-violence teaching.? Or the father?? Or both?

    And does the whole family flee? Or do the father and son remain behind to fight?

    And who is the enemy?? I presume it’s someone who belongs to the?the dead man’s clan.

    And what becomes the son’s objective goal and strategy?? Is it merely a maintenance goal — to stay alive by killing those seeking to kill him?? Or must he save his life by ultimately?proving his killing was justified?

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  2. Posted: February 24, 2016In: Examples

    When left for dead in the Rocky Mountain wilderness, a fur trapper must call on all his will to survive to track down the man who murdered his son in front of him.

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    Added an answer on February 25, 2016 at 5:34 am

    A trapper mauled by a bear struggles to survive in the mountain wilderness and take his revenge on the man who killed his son and left him for dead. (29 words) The Revenant

    A trapper mauled by a bear struggles to survive in the mountain wilderness and take his revenge on the man who killed his son and left him for dead.
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    The Revenant

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  3. Posted: February 20, 2016In: SciFi

    Rio, a waitress in a small Texas town, graduated high school last week, survived being burned alive yesterday and today discovered the reason why. She is descended from Quetzalcoatl, Aztec god of Light and Knowledge and their bloodline has been hunted by rival god, Tezcatlipoca, Aztec god of War and his descendants for millennia. After learning more about her lineage, Rio decides to take the fight to the enemy and make the hunters the prey.

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    Added an answer on February 23, 2016 at 9:35 am

    I think that the waitress's "maintenance"?objective goal of trying to stay alive?is good enough.? What greater personal objective goal can one fight for than one's own?life? And there's another factor.? If she's a descendant of an Aztec god, surely part of her genetic inheritance would be the god'sRead more

    I think that the waitress’s “maintenance”?objective goal of trying to stay alive?is good enough.? What greater personal objective goal can one fight for than one’s own?life?

    And there’s another factor.? If she’s a descendant of an Aztec god, surely part of her genetic inheritance would be the god’s particular powers.? Which, it seems to me, ?she must learn to harness for the battle.? Yeah, echoes of Luke Skywalker and the Force, but this story?seem to be hero’s journey? similar? to that? lucrative franchise.? (Which is why I said earlier that?I think this could be an origin story setting up a franchise.)

    So something like:

    After a Latina waitress discovers she’s descended from a legendary?Aztec god, she must? develop?the powers she has inherited to?defeat rival gods?who have vowed to kill her.
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