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  1. Posted: February 20, 2016In: SciFi

    2012 has come and gone. A young woman discovers she?s descended from Aztec gods and joins the centuries-old fight between rival gods and their descendants for the preservation of her bloodline and the world.

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    Added an answer on February 20, 2016 at 9:30 am

    When a young woman discovers she's descended from Aztec gods, she must join a millenia-old fight against rival gods intent on killing off her bloodline -- beginning with her. (29 words) "2012 has come and gone" is extraneous.? I think it?can be safely assumed that the time frame is in or near the prRead more

    When a young woman discovers she’s descended from Aztec gods, she must join a millenia-old fight against rival gods intent on killing off her bloodline — beginning with her.
    (29 words)

    “2012 has come and gone” is extraneous.? I think it?can be safely assumed that the time frame is in or near the present.

    Methinks this concept has definite?franchise potential. It’s a war of the gods that can go on… and on…?and on,?forwards and backwards in time.? And it would target the important (and woefully?neglected by Hollyweird)??Latina/Latino demographic.

    ? Buena suerte!

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  2. Posted: February 18, 2016In: SciFi

    After surviving a brutal attack, Rio Madrid, a young Latina living in a small, Texas border town, discovers she is a direct descendant of Aztec gods and becomes the target of supernatural enemies who have been hunting down her bloodline, one by one, throughout time.

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    Added an answer on February 19, 2016 at 4:05 am

    As Nir Shelter said, she seems more acted upon than acting. As a result of discovering her true? genealogy, what becomes her objective goal?? What must she do to fight back, to harness the potent but latent powers I presume? she has? (Otherwise why would she be the target for extermination?)

    As Nir Shelter said, she seems more acted upon than acting.

    As a result of discovering her true? genealogy, what becomes her objective goal?? What must she do to fight back, to harness the potent but latent powers I presume? she has? (Otherwise why would she be the target for extermination?)

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  3. Posted: February 19, 2016In: Drama

    A grief-stricken man anoints himself the prince of a make-believe country to help his young son cope with his mother?s death but the story spirals out of control and he must come to terms with his own loss before his son is taken into state custody.

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    Added an answer on February 19, 2016 at 3:56 am

    I frankly ?don't see how the father's lie provides aid and comfort to his son for the loss of his mother.? Two real life princes, William and Harry of the House of Windsor,?had to cope with the death of their mother, Diana.? The privileges and resources available to the royal princes provided?materiRead more

    I frankly ?don’t see how the father’s lie provides aid and comfort to his son for the loss of his mother.? Two real life princes, William and Harry of the House of Windsor,?had to cope with the death of their mother, Diana.? The privileges and resources available to the royal princes provided?material ?buffers for their grieving process, I suppose.? But?having?the?protagonist in this logline say? he is a prince? just seems to be?talk.? What’s the walk — the substantive, ?material?buffers the father can provide for the sake of his son by lying that he can’t provide by just being a?compassionate and thoughtful?father?

    Why does the father feel he must lie to his son?

    Anyway, I suggest the logline needs to indicate the age of the son.? Because?as children age into puberty, they? become more?skeptical of anything their parents say.

    And who are the others?? Kids his son’s age?? Adults?

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