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Succesful lawer from Moscaw is obsessed with an american porn star, all attemts to meet her in person fail untill a brilliant idea comes to his mind to press charges against her.
Okay, thanks for the clarification.? But for the purposes of the logline and the plot, what is his objective goal?? Is the porn star just a means to another end, a publicity gimmick to achieve his real purpose, his real objective goal? If his real objective goal is professional success and recognitiRead more
Okay, thanks for the clarification.? But for the purposes of the logline and the plot, what is his objective goal?? Is the porn star just a means to another end, a publicity gimmick to achieve his real purpose, his real objective goal?
If his real objective goal is professional success and recognition that’s fine for plot but? it needs to be defined with a specific benchmark or achievement that certifies to the character (and the audience) that he has indeed achieved “professional success and recognition”.?? In other words, what’s the visual for “professional success and recognition”.? What happens in that “success” ?scene?
See lessSuccesful lawer from Moscaw is obsessed with an american porn star, all attemts to meet her in person fail untill a brilliant idea comes to his mind to press charges against her.
How can someone in Russia press charges against an American?? I mean,?she?would have to be?Russia when he files specious charges, right?? So that would have to be the timing of the inciting incident:? when she is visiting as a tourist or ?working on a film in Russia, he files charges. And , as Nir SRead more
How can someone in Russia press charges against an American?? I mean,?she?would have to be?Russia when he files specious charges, right?? So that would have to be the timing of the inciting incident:? when she is visiting as a tourist or ?working on a film in Russia, he files charges.
And , as Nir Shelter indicated, so he files charges and as a result gets to meet her in person.?? End of story?? Or… what???What is the plot that?arises out of the meeting??? What does he want to achieve after meeting with her?
See lessKole Owen is a second generation champion wrestler who after his father’s death discovers his father’s whole other family; a new sister and a bi-racial autistic toddler half brother.
I like Richiev's suggestion,?and I think the story would be even?stronger if the wrestler doesn't just want the estate -- he needs it to have the money to ?fulfill his dreams for?a wrestling career. So when he? sympathizes ?and bonds with his half-siblings, he finds himself on the horns of a?genuineRead more
I like Richiev’s suggestion,?and I think the story would be even?stronger if the wrestler doesn’t just want the estate — he needs it to have the money to ?fulfill his dreams for?a wrestling career. So when he? sympathizes ?and bonds with his half-siblings, he finds himself on the horns of a?genuine ?dilemma:? he must choose between his biggest dream — and his biggest need.
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