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  1. Posted: December 12, 2015In: Drama

    While keeping his unemployment from his wife a man prevents a crime. His lies grow as he becomes a local hero.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on December 15, 2015 at 8:40 am

    How does he keep his unemployment from his wife -- and still pay the bills?

    How does he keep his unemployment from his wife — and still pay the bills?

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  2. Posted: December 14, 2015In: Drama

    After the Grim Reaper has guided countless people to the Afterlife, a suitable replacement must don the cowl, so Death can finally rest in peace.

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    Added an answer on December 15, 2015 at 5:56 am

    Who is the protagonist -- the Grim Guy or an unnamed entity who must find a replacement?? What's the inciting incident - - what sets up the need to replace him now?? What's at stake if no replacement is found? As written, there's raw material for a skeleton of a sketch, but it needs to be fleshed ouRead more

    Who is the protagonist — the Grim Guy or an unnamed entity who must find a replacement?? What’s the inciting incident – – what sets up the need to replace him now?? What’s at stake if no replacement is found?

    As written, there’s raw material for a skeleton of a sketch, but it needs to be fleshed out.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: December 10, 2015In: Drama

    A trans-woman reflects on key moments in her life as a boy while visiting her home town to exact revenge against the man who had her wrongfully imprisoned.

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    Added an answer on December 11, 2015 at 11:51 pm

    As gokulthedreamer said.And it seems to me that of more dramatic interest than getting revenge would be events and influences that induced? the transgender woman to go under the knife.?? I'm guessing that's the dramatic substance of? the?"reflections on key moments", but I'm not sure and I shouldn'tRead more

    As gokulthedreamer said.

    And it seems to me that of more dramatic interest than getting revenge would be events and influences that induced? the transgender woman to go under the knife.?? I’m guessing that’s the dramatic substance of? the?”reflections on key moments”, but I’m not sure and I shouldn’t have to guess. The logline might benefit from?focusing the spotlight on that?facet of the story.?

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