1. Posted: November 1, 2015In:

    In a world where the police can get a warrant to search your memories, a former cop is implanted with murderous false memories and must find a way to have them removed before he’s caught and his mind read.

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    Why would I want to root for a corrupt psy-cop?? Okay, the murder memories aren't his, but he's still a corrupt cop. He has a lot of authentic personal memories to answer for. Why not a clean psy-cop gets framed with false memories?? Not only does he have to do a memory dump s, he also needs to findRead more

    Why would I want to root for a corrupt psy-cop?? Okay, the murder memories aren’t his, but he’s still a corrupt cop. He has a lot of authentic personal memories to answer for.

    Why not a clean psy-cop gets framed with false memories?? Not only does he have to do a memory dump s, he also needs to find out who dunnit and why he, of all people, is being set up.

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  2. Posted: November 2, 2015In:

    A misfit South African farmer, going through a existential crisis , finds companionship in a French, new age – hippie couple, but it transpires that they belong to a survivalist , narcissistic cult and plan to parasitically abuse the farmers resources to prepare for doomsday at all costs.

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    I presume that this is a variant, or and extended logline of the other.? One problem with this version is that? the doomsdayers seem to be in the driver's seat of the story, not the farmer.? If he's the protagonist then when he's faced with the threat they pose, what does he do?? What becomes his obRead more

    I presume that this is a variant, or and extended logline of the other.? One problem with this version is that? the doomsdayers seem to be in the driver’s seat of the story, not the farmer.? If he’s the protagonist then when he’s faced with the threat they pose, what does he do?? What becomes his objective goal?

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  3. Posted: November 2, 2015In:

    In a disillusioned farmer’s quest for contentment he finds more than he bargained for when he houses a new ager couple who transpires to be savage doomsday preppers.

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    Not only is the farmer's goal unclear, so is the threat.? What does "more than he bargained for mean"??? What exactly is the threat the doomsdayers pose?? I've known more doomsdayers than I care to count or recall, but they were more a danger to themselves than to others. Just because some one is aRead more

    Not only is the farmer’s goal unclear, so is the threat.? What does “more than he bargained for mean”??? What exactly is the threat the doomsdayers pose?? I’ve known more doomsdayers than I care to count or recall, but they were more a danger to themselves than to others. Just because some one is a doomsdayer doesn’t mean he’s a menace to others.

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