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A brilliant but daring high school senior creates a multi-million dollar video game by stealing the concept from a big-time CEO.
One question your logline (and script) will have to confront is:? "How is this fictional story not just different, but as cool and compelling as the real life story of 'The Social Network', the real life story of a real life character, Mark Zuckerberg, who stole the concept for Facebook?" Logline anRead more
One question your logline (and script) will have to confront is:? “How is this fictional story not just different, but as cool and compelling as the real life story of ‘The Social Network’, the real life story of a real life character, Mark Zuckerberg, who stole the concept for Facebook?” Logline and script readers? will inevitably compare this story to Aaron Sorkin’s — a tough act to follow.
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It's not clear in my mind as to what the plot of this story is.? Are employees not just being terminated--fired--they're being "terminated with extreme prejudice" -- killed?If that is in fact, the premise of the story, then I presume the "ambitious woman" is the culprit, or at least the suspected cuRead more
It’s not clear in my mind as to what the plot of this story is.? Are employees not just being terminated–fired–they’re being “terminated with extreme prejudice” — killed?
If that is in fact, the premise of the story, then I presume the “ambitious woman” is the culprit, or at least the suspected culprit, ergo, the antagonist. So who is the good guy or gal — the? protagonist?? Who must solve the mystery, stop the murders?
See lessA brilliant but daring high school senior creates a multi-million dollar video game by stealing the concept from a big-time CEO.
As Nir Shelter said. The logline sets up a situation for? a? potentially interesting plot, but it doesn't describe the plot itself.? That is, it doesn't describe what happens after he steals the concept? for? the video game.? Obviously, the CEO isn't going to let him get away with it.? He's going toRead more
As Nir Shelter said.
The logline sets up a situation for? a? potentially interesting plot, but it doesn’t describe the plot itself.? That is, it doesn’t describe what happens after he steals the concept? for? the video game.? Obviously, the CEO isn’t going to let him get away with it.? He’s going to retaliate, isn’t he?? How?? Doesn’t the kid’s problems, hence the plot, begin after he steals the concept?
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