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  1. Posted: November 10, 2015In: SciFi

    When a planet in another galaxy is faced with annihilation, a plan hatches to have Franklin, an ordinary boy with extraordinary abilities from earth, help save the planet from destruction from the evil being known as Xero.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 10, 2015 at 2:54 am

    What's at stake? ?Why must this kid be dispatched to another planet in another galaxy? As if there aren't any problems we could use this kid to solve on this planet in this galaxy? ?If Xero poses no existenital threat to planet earth, why must the kid ?meddle in in affairs in a universe far, far awaRead more

    What’s at stake? ?Why must this kid be dispatched to another planet in another galaxy? As if there aren’t any problems we could use this kid to solve on this planet in this galaxy? ?If Xero poses no existenital threat to planet earth, why must the kid ?meddle in in affairs in a universe far, far away?

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  2. Posted: November 3, 2015In: Student Loglines

    In order to take care of her recently orphaned younger sister, a broke twentysomething decides to sleep around with married men with the intention of blackmailing them, lest she expose them for their infidelity.

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    Added an answer on November 9, 2015 at 8:38 am

    Why does it always have to be a woman who sells her body?? How about a role reversal?? A guy utilizes his only marketable assets-- his looks and charm -- to take care of his loved one by becoming a gigolo, blackmails married women.? Who, after all,? are likelt be more emotionally vulnerable and econRead more

    Why does it always have to be a woman who sells her body?? How about a role reversal?? A guy utilizes his only marketable assets– his looks and charm — to take care of his loved one by becoming a gigolo, blackmails married women.? Who, after all,? are likelt be more emotionally vulnerable and economically dependent? (on their husbands)?

    fwiw.

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  3. Posted: November 9, 2015In: Crime

    After his father dies under mysterious circumstances, a young man gets tangled up in an undercover operation against London’s most notorious crime family.

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    Added an answer on November 9, 2015 at 7:51 am

    I suggest there needs to be a stronger cause-and-effect link stated between the father's death and the young man getting involved in a covert operation.? Does he get involved in the covert operation while trying to find out who killed his father?? If so, the logline should indicate that.? Or is therRead more

    I suggest there needs to be a stronger cause-and-effect link stated between the father’s death and the young man getting involved in a covert operation.? Does he get involved in the covert operation while trying to find out who killed his father?? If so, the logline should indicate that.? Or is there some other reason?

    And what does “tangled up” entail in terms of jeopardy?? What threat to the young man does his involvement pose?? Who is his antagonist in this scenario?? And what are the stakes?? Which is to ask,? ultimately, what is he in danger of losing?? His life?? Or…?

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