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  1. Posted: November 9, 2015In: Crime

    When a midnight-show radio host receives an anonymous hint about a mysterious murder, he sets out to find the real killer and needs to convince the police they’re after the wrong person.

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    Added an answer on November 9, 2015 at 7:45 am

    The premise has possibilities except there does not appear to be a compelling dramatic reason for the radio host to pursue the anonymous tip.? Mere curiosity isn't enough.? What is his personal stake?? What's the? trip wire in his mind that the tip sets off that compels him to find the real killer??Read more

    The premise has possibilities except there does not appear to be a compelling dramatic reason for the radio host to pursue the anonymous tip.? Mere curiosity isn’t enough.? What is his personal stake?? What’s the? trip wire in his mind that the tip sets off that compels him to find the real killer?? Why is he the only one who cares enough to follow up on the tip?

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  2. Posted: November 9, 2015In: Horror

    When a young girl wakes up in the forest, struggling to remember what brought her there and made her pass out, a friend appears to help her get back home.

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    Added an answer on November 9, 2015 at 7:39 am

    The genre is horror.? What's so horrible about a friend appearing to help her get back home?? I'm guessing that the 'friend' turns out to be her worst nightmare incarnate.? But I shouldn't have to guess that. The logline should tell me.? What is the nature of the threat this 'friend' poses.? What muRead more

    The genre is horror.? What’s so horrible about a friend appearing to help her get back home?? I’m guessing that the ‘friend’ turns out to be her worst nightmare incarnate.? But I shouldn’t have to guess that. The logline should tell me.? What is the nature of the threat this ‘friend’ poses.? What must she do about it?

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  3. Posted: November 9, 2015In: Horror

    When two young lovers get a motorboat and escape on a romantic weekend adventure, a fatal mistake leaves them stranded on a dark island outside of Stockholm for at least the night.

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    Added an answer on November 9, 2015 at 7:34 am

    As bamgomes said.? The genre is horror.? Well, what's so horrible about 2 lovers being stranded on an island overnight?? The threat to the young lovers needs to be identified.

    As bamgomes said.? The genre is horror.? Well, what’s so horrible about 2 lovers being stranded on an island overnight?? The threat to the young lovers needs to be identified.

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