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  1. Posted: July 23, 2015In: Public

    When their conversion to goodness is discovered by Lucifer, a young devil and his converted, ‘goody two shoes’ family flee Hell for the suburban life of Canberra where the boy finds that being a horned, red-skinned devil and ‘fitting in’ to Earthly life is not as easy as he thought.

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    Added an answer on July 24, 2015 at 8:25 am

    Cryter: What's the movie genre of your concept?

    Cryter:

    What’s the movie genre of your concept?

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  2. Posted: July 22, 2015In: Public

    A racially maligned orphan prone to violence is unwillingly thrust into politics and must fight for those who have vilified her to avoid civil war as well as protect her friends

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    Added an answer on July 23, 2015 at 11:54 am

    Europe? The Middle Ages? I would have never guessed that from the logline. Never. And it seems to me that the quasi-historical framework and geography are key elements in the concept. Otherwise as currently stated in the logline, the concept is contextually vague; it could take place any time, any wRead more

    Europe? The Middle Ages? I would have never guessed that from the logline. Never. And it seems to me that the quasi-historical framework and geography are key elements in the concept. Otherwise as currently stated in the logline, the concept is contextually vague; it could take place any time, any where. Which is to say, it doesn’t stand out; there doesn’t seem to be any unique hook or twist.

    And what does “racially maligned” mean? It sounds like a euphemism for persecution, maybe enslavement. Why not explicitly state the race and the explicit state the nature of the orphan’s predicament?

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  3. Posted: July 22, 2015In: Public

    A racially maligned orphan prone to violence is unwillingly thrust into politics and must fight for those who have vilified her to avoid civil war as well as protect her friends

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    Added an answer on July 22, 2015 at 10:33 pm

    Where/when is the story set?

    Where/when is the story set?

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