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  1. Posted: July 19, 2015In: Public

    When a rookie DA?s carrier is almost derailed he redeems himself when, through an old journal, he emerges into an alternate timeline and receives much needed advice from a legendary prosecutor nicknamed The Gasser

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    Added an answer on July 20, 2015 at 9:22 pm

    The logline is for a TV series, not a feature film. Still the logline would benefit by indicating a strong plot for the pilot episode-- one that will grab and hold audience's attention. (Like the pilot episode for "Breaking Bad".) The logline focuses on the less interesting character and weaker of tRead more

    The logline is for a TV series, not a feature film. Still the logline would benefit by indicating a strong plot for the pilot episode– one that will grab and hold audience’s attention. (Like the pilot episode for “Breaking Bad”.)

    The logline focuses on the less interesting character and weaker of the two characters. The DA is not legendary and he doesn’t have the right stuff to be a successful DA. In contrast, the “Gasser” is both legendary and has the right stuff. Maybe the logline (and story) should focus on Gasser as the main character.

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  2. Posted: July 18, 2015

    In an apocalyptic winter filled with zombies, Juliet is on a rampage to kill Romeo at all costs.

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    Added an answer on July 20, 2015 at 9:03 pm

    The concept will inevitably have to compete against the other zombie parody of a classic, "Pride and Prejudice and Zombies", the book and now a movie in post-production. In what way will the zombie treatment of Shakespeare's famous play distinguish itself from the zombie treatment of Jane Austen's fRead more

    The concept will inevitably have to compete against the other zombie parody of a classic, “Pride and Prejudice and Zombies”, the book and now a movie in post-production. In what way will the zombie treatment of Shakespeare’s famous play distinguish itself from the zombie treatment of Jane Austen’s famous novel?

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  3. Posted: July 19, 2015In: Public

    In 1950?s Los Angeles a vengeful rookie DA learns to think like the notorious criminals he prosecutes in order to bring justice to the Southland.

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    Added an answer on July 19, 2015 at 10:54 pm

    "Thinking like a criminal" is standard operating procedure, what every law enforcement person has to learn to do to be effective. So this is not a salient characteristic that would set the DA apart from the pack, that would distinguish the concept from all the other crime procedural series.

    “Thinking like a criminal” is standard operating procedure, what every law enforcement person has to learn to do to be effective. So this is not a salient characteristic that would set the DA apart from the pack, that would distinguish the concept from all the other crime procedural series.

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