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When a misfit discovers that she, and the rest of humanity, are just a computer simulation, she must team with a rebellious AI to prevent the simulators shutting down the virtual world in an attempt to stop humanity from being reborn.
So basically humanity is f****ed. We're damned if we keep the simulation going because our existence is a digital illusion; and we're damned if we stop the simulation because that means our extinction. That's a bummer. In contrast to the "The Matrix" which offered hope in the form of real flesh andRead more
So basically humanity is f****ed. We’re damned if we keep the simulation going because our existence is a digital illusion; and we’re damned if we stop the simulation because that means our extinction.
That’s a bummer. In contrast to the “The Matrix” which offered hope in the form of real flesh and blood rebels and the prospect of liberation from the simulation.
While the logline confirms my worst existential suspicions, I’m not sure it is marketable.
See lessAfter being posted to a Greenlandic prison for a temporary placement, a young doctor must help the inmates with their personal problems while dealing with some unruly inmates and unsympathetic guards
What Lee Brooks said. They story still lacks focus and specificity. The character lacks a specific objective goal. As written, the logline suggests 3 general problems: 1] help the inmates with their personal problems problems 2] while dealing with some unruly inmates and 3] unsympathetic guards. ThoRead more
What Lee Brooks said. They story still lacks focus and specificity. The character lacks a specific objective goal.
As written, the logline suggests 3 general problems: 1] help the inmates with their personal problems problems 2] while dealing with some unruly inmates and 3] unsympathetic guards. Those general problems may be part of the context and complications of the plot — but what is the plot? What is the one — and only one primary objective goal of the doctor that frames the story? Who is the antagonist/nemesis that opposes the doctor’s objective goal? What are the stakes? That is, what does the doctor stand to gain if he succeeds, stand to lose if he fails?
See lessIn the summer of '65, four friends make a mad dash to Vegas to get married before midnight to avoid facing the Vietnam draft.
>>>But, many husbands were drafted. IF they married after August 26, 1965 (in which case they no longer qualified for the marriage deferment).
>>>But, many husbands were drafted.
IF they married after August 26, 1965 (in which case they no longer qualified for the marriage deferment).
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