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  1. Posted: June 9, 2015In: Public

    In a future where criminals are punished with instant aging, when a young ex-convict -turned 70- learns about a place where his youth can be restored, he has a week to find it before the process becomes irreversible.

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    Added an answer on June 9, 2015 at 9:04 pm

    I, too, am intrigued by the concept but would like some clarification. So murderers (and only murderers?) are instantly aged. Then what? Does it mean they live out their shortened lifespans in prison? And what's the rationale for this drawn out punishment rather than quick and dirty capital punishmeRead more

    I, too, am intrigued by the concept but would like some clarification.

    So murderers (and only murderers?) are instantly aged. Then what? Does it mean they live out their shortened lifespans in prison? And what’s the rationale for this drawn out punishment rather than quick and dirty capital punishment?

    And if people can be instantly aged, why set the penalty at 60? Why not 65 or 70 condemning them to even shorter and more enfeebled lives?

    And why should the audience care about, want the protagonist to hold onto to his youth? He’s guilty, has it coming to him…. doesn’t he?

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  2. Posted: June 6, 2015In: Public

    A remedial math teacher is forced to wonder if he wasted his potential as a screenwriter when his ex-highschool sweetheart, now a hollywood actress visits their hometown.

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    Added an answer on June 6, 2015 at 3:27 am

    Yep. Same problem as before. So he's discontented, a frustrated wannabe writer. What does he DO about it? What his action plan, what becomes his objective goal?

    Yep. Same problem as before. So he’s discontented, a frustrated wannabe writer. What does he DO about it? What his action plan, what becomes his objective goal?

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  3. Posted: June 5, 2015In: Public

    A female ex-military operative awakens to discover she has been transformed into a cyborg by a group of scientists who are challenged by her efforts to escape and retaliate.

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    Added an answer on June 6, 2015 at 3:06 am

    Given that the cyborg character (salvaged human restored and enhanced by technology) has been done several times (as in the Robocop franchise) what does this premise bring that's new to the trope?

    Given that the cyborg character (salvaged human restored and enhanced by technology) has been done several times (as in the Robocop franchise) what does this premise bring that’s new to the trope?

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