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  1. Posted: February 21, 2015In: Public

    A man?s drunken persona comes to life revealing a dark side.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 21, 2015 at 10:28 pm

    It seems to me that a more interesting story would be what happens, what he does as a result of his epiphany. Yet that is where you want to end the story, on an unresolved, negative beat? Why?

    It seems to me that a more interesting story would be what happens, what he does as a result of his epiphany. Yet that is where you want to end the story, on an unresolved, negative beat? Why?

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  2. Posted: February 21, 2015In: Public

    A man?s drunken persona comes to life revealing a dark side.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 21, 2015 at 10:28 pm

    It seems to me that a more interesting story would be what happens, what he does as a result of his epiphany. Yet that is where you want to end the story, on an unresolved, negative beat? Why?

    It seems to me that a more interesting story would be what happens, what he does as a result of his epiphany. Yet that is where you want to end the story, on an unresolved, negative beat? Why?

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  3. Posted: February 21, 2015In: Public

    A man?s drunken persona comes to life revealing a dark side.

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    Added an answer on February 21, 2015 at 1:34 pm

    Drunkenness can manifest a radically different personality. I've seen it happen. The question is what is he going to do about his drinking problem? Unfortunately, "control his demons" is general, lacks specificity. What is his specific plan for controlling his demons. Checking into detox? Going to ARead more

    Drunkenness can manifest a radically different personality. I’ve seen it happen. The question is what is he going to do about his drinking problem? Unfortunately, “control his demons” is general, lacks specificity. What is his specific plan for controlling his demons. Checking into detox? Going to AA meetings? What?

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