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A man?s drunken persona comes to life revealing a dark side.
Drunkenness can manifest a radically different personality. I've seen it happen. The question is what is he going to do about his drinking problem? Unfortunately, "control his demons" is general, lacks specificity. What is his specific plan for controlling his demons. Checking into detox? Going to ARead more
Drunkenness can manifest a radically different personality. I’ve seen it happen. The question is what is he going to do about his drinking problem? Unfortunately, “control his demons” is general, lacks specificity. What is his specific plan for controlling his demons. Checking into detox? Going to AA meetings? What?
See lessWhile a boy is at camp he discovers the owner of the camp was a notorious bank robber and the boy wants to expose him but he doesn't want to get caught by the stingy counselors.
Good revision. His real dramatic problem is that nobody's going to believe him. It's his word against that of the adults. So his objective goal has to be to find the evidence to make the cops believe him.
Good revision. His real dramatic problem is that nobody’s going to believe him. It’s his word against that of the adults. So his objective goal has to be to find the evidence to make the cops believe him.
See lessWhile a boy is at camp he discovers the owner of the camp was a notorious bank robber and the boy wants to expose him but he doesn't want to get caught by the stingy counselors.
Good revision. His real dramatic problem is that nobody's going to believe him. It's his word against that of the adults. So his objective goal has to be to find the evidence to make the cops believe him.
Good revision. His real dramatic problem is that nobody’s going to believe him. It’s his word against that of the adults. So his objective goal has to be to find the evidence to make the cops believe him.
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