When an evil sorcerer kidnaps her brother, a young gypsy who has used her psychic powers to exploit others must learn how to use them to defeat the sorcerer.

It seems to me that the premise would benefit from a stronger character arc. That is, she hasn’t hidden or repressed her magical powers; rather, she has squandered them, used them for selfish, foolish, negative purposes.

Framed in that way, the aspect of the story that hooks my interest is not that she must rescue her brother — rescue scenarios are a dime a dozen — but that in order to rescue him she must first transform herself. She must learn how to transform all her negative energy into positive energy, to retool her talents for good instead of evil.

And, come to find out, the right way to use her talents is also the hardest way.

fwiw.