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  1. Posted: February 1, 2015In: Public

    When slobby Jim and well-groomed Leo move into student housing together, their initial personality clash evolves into an unlikely friendship as they share the triumphs and humiliations of life in Sydney.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 10, 2015 at 1:24 pm

    >>> over the course of the first episode, they come to understand each other and connect Not so fast! The essence of an Odd Couple relationship is that their differences are irreconcilable. They may need each other (to pay the rent, etc.) but their inability to understand each other and connect shouRead more

    >>> over the course of the first episode, they come to understand each other and connect

    Not so fast! The essence of an Odd Couple relationship is that their differences are irreconcilable. They may need each other (to pay the rent, etc.) but their inability to understand each other and connect should persist, because that inability is a running gag, a major ongoing source of conflict and comedy. Each episode presents a new problem they have to solve — but that isn’t the prime source of conflict and comedy. The prime source of conflict and comedy is and must continue to be the incompatible personality styles they have in dealing with the problem.

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  2. Posted: February 9, 2015In: Public

    An intergalactic space army called the star guardians are assigned to go up against the most dangerous army in the galaxy led by the charismatic and evil leader named Blade.

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    Added an answer on February 9, 2015 at 2:40 pm

    I don't see anything in the logline that makes the concept stand out from the 1,001 other films in production about warfare in outer space. Whom does Blade threaten? What are the stakes? What is unique about this galactic conflict that distinguishes it from all the others? While there is a specificRead more

    I don’t see anything in the logline that makes the concept stand out from the 1,001 other films in production about warfare in outer space. Whom does Blade threaten? What are the stakes? What is unique about this galactic conflict that distinguishes it from all the others?

    While there is a specific antagonist (although for the purposes of a logline he doesn’t need to be named), there is no mention of the protagonist, the leader of the guardians. Yet, the first thing movie producers want to know about the characters is: who is the hero? What is his defining characteristic or special power or skill? And what is his specific mission (objective goal)? And his flaw or weakness that threatens the success of the mission?

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  3. Posted: February 9, 2015In: Public

    An intergalactic space army called the star guardians are assigned to go up against the most dangerous army in the galaxy led by the charismatic and evil leader named Blade.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 9, 2015 at 2:40 pm

    I don't see anything in the logline that makes the concept stand out from the 1,001 other films in production about warfare in outer space. Whom does Blade threaten? What are the stakes? What is unique about this galactic conflict that distinguishes it from all the others? While there is a specificRead more

    I don’t see anything in the logline that makes the concept stand out from the 1,001 other films in production about warfare in outer space. Whom does Blade threaten? What are the stakes? What is unique about this galactic conflict that distinguishes it from all the others?

    While there is a specific antagonist (although for the purposes of a logline he doesn’t need to be named), there is no mention of the protagonist, the leader of the guardians. Yet, the first thing movie producers want to know about the characters is: who is the hero? What is his defining characteristic or special power or skill? And what is his specific mission (objective goal)? And his flaw or weakness that threatens the success of the mission?

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