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A death row inmate is beaten and suffers amnesia, a psychologist works feverishly to prevent his execution.
After a death row inmate suffers amnesia from a brutal beating, his lawyer is left with nothing but clues in his diary to prove his innocence before his execution date.
After a death row inmate suffers amnesia from a brutal beating, his lawyer is left with nothing but clues in his diary to prove his innocence before his execution date.
See lessA death row inmate is beaten and suffers amnesia, a psychologist works feverishly to prevent his execution.
After a death row inmate suffers amnesia from a brutal beating, his lawyer is left with nothing but clues in his diary to prove his innocence before his execution date.
After a death row inmate suffers amnesia from a brutal beating, his lawyer is left with nothing but clues in his diary to prove his innocence before his execution date.
See lessHarlow Reeve, an orphaned teenager becomes aware of her teleportation abilities when she looks into her parents past. Social Media discloses her secret, when she is caught on camera, the world suddenly starts to become aware of her divergence
It's an intriguing premise. And Peter Nguyen's take is an improvement, but I think there remains a fundamental problem: the logline establishes a situation -- but not a plot. A plot is about a character struggling toward a specific objective goal with specific stakes. As currently written, the logliRead more
It’s an intriguing premise. And Peter Nguyen’s take is an improvement, but I think there remains a fundamental problem: the logline establishes a situation — but not a plot. A plot is about a character struggling toward a specific objective goal with specific stakes.
As currently written, the logline places her a reactive role instead of proactive one. The media spotlight is a complication — but a complication to what? That is, what objective goal does it make more difficult for her to achieve? Having discovered her unusual powers, what does she want to do with them? What specifically must she struggle to accomplish?
And what are the stakes? What does she stand to lose if she fails to accomplish her objective goal with her ultra-natural ability? What does she stand to gain if she succeeds?
Give her a specific objective goal and stakes, and I think this has a lot of potential to be a winner.
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