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When stuck in a Groundhog Day 7-day cycle after an explosion on the ISS, a career-obsessed astronaut must figure out the cause of the blast and why he keeps coming back.
I am having a hard time imagining what is going on, what the plot is, what the stakes are:? he survived -- what is there for him (and the audience) to worry about?So when he wakes up, there is no one around, no support team, no medics to explain to him what happened?? Where is he?? In a hospital or.Read more
I am having a hard time imagining what is going on, what the plot is, what the stakes are:? he survived — what is there for him (and the audience) to worry about?
So when he wakes up, there is no one around, no support team, no medics to explain to him what happened?? Where is he?? In a hospital or…?
And I don’t see how his being career driven or a family man is germane to his dramatic predicament (whatever that predicament is).
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?An interesting premise, but... mess it up, really mess it up.? Go deeper.Have her mother make a "Mrs. Robinson" move on her boyfriend (or at least the boy she has a crush on.)And her mother is not only arrested but also pregnant.? The minor whom she seduced is the father.fwiw
?An interesting premise, but… mess it up, really mess it up.? Go deeper.
Have her mother make a “Mrs. Robinson” move on her boyfriend (or at least the boy she has a crush on.)
And her mother is not only arrested but also pregnant.? The minor whom she seduced is the father.
fwiw
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Worth repeating what Scott said: The logline is not only the first impression of the script, it is also the first impression of the writer. You only get one chance to make the right first impression.
Worth repeating what Scott said:
The logline is not only the first impression of the script, it is also the first impression of the writer.
You only get one chance to make the right first impression.
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