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  1. Posted: November 2, 2014In: Public

    In the final moments before facing the firing squad, the charismatic leader of a murderous robbery gang makes one last request: to have her confession heard by the priest who was once her lover.

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    Added an answer on November 8, 2014 at 2:02 am

    Hours before her execution by firing squad, a notorious female gangster makes one last request: to have her confession heard by the priest who was once her lover. 29 words. A suggested plot spine on which to arrange all the yada-yada. (And in my Pavlovian conditioned Hollyweird mind that's the sizzlRead more

    Hours before her execution by firing squad, a notorious female gangster makes one last request: to have her confession heard by the priest who was once her lover.

    29 words. A suggested plot spine on which to arrange all the yada-yada.

    (And in my Pavlovian conditioned Hollyweird mind that’s the sizzle.)

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  2. Posted: November 7, 2014In: Public

    A spoiled young woman rebels against her abusive father by seducing her way into organized crime; she soon falls in love with a mafia boss, only to discover her irresponsible behavior has made her the key element an enigmatic criminal conspiracy needs to take that mafia boss down.

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    Added an answer on November 7, 2014 at 1:08 pm

    "the key element an enigmatic criminal conspiracy needs" seems, well, enigmatic. The gist of the story, as far as I can make out, is that she discovers she is a piece being pushed around in someone else's chess game. Which seems to make her passive, manipulated. If that is the case, then what does sRead more

    “the key element an enigmatic criminal conspiracy needs” seems, well, enigmatic.

    The gist of the story, as far as I can make out, is that she discovers she is a piece being pushed around in someone else’s chess game. Which seems to make her passive, manipulated. If that is the case, then what does she proactively do about it? What is her objective goal in order to take charge of her own life, to become the master of her own game?

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  3. Posted: November 7, 2014In: Public

    A spoiled young woman rebels against her abusive father by seducing her way into organized crime; she soon falls in love with a mafia boss, only to discover her irresponsible behavior has made her the key element an enigmatic criminal conspiracy needs to take that mafia boss down.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on November 7, 2014 at 1:08 pm

    "the key element an enigmatic criminal conspiracy needs" seems, well, enigmatic. The gist of the story, as far as I can make out, is that she discovers she is a piece being pushed around in someone else's chess game. Which seems to make her passive, manipulated. If that is the case, then what does sRead more

    “the key element an enigmatic criminal conspiracy needs” seems, well, enigmatic.

    The gist of the story, as far as I can make out, is that she discovers she is a piece being pushed around in someone else’s chess game. Which seems to make her passive, manipulated. If that is the case, then what does she proactively do about it? What is her objective goal in order to take charge of her own life, to become the master of her own game?

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